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Reviews for Alice the 19th

By : SailorAurora
  • From ANON - indigo on April 03, 2004
    In response:

    There is a difference between being creative and being blatantly, stupidly wrong.

    If this fic is an AU, as you now claim it to be, there should be an AU label preceding the story.

    One of the so-called "rules" is that a fic is either AU, or conforms to the rules set by the events preceding the tale.

    I highly enjoy AU fics. I highly enjoy plot twists created by fanfic authors, "distortions on the original" as you put it, et cetera.

    But I appreciate them as either valid twists in the story, AU labels, or stories that seem to have been honestly researched and posessing some knowledge of the surrounding
    circumstances.

    These rules exist for a reason.
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  • From ANON - PrincessLemon on March 31, 2004
    Hmmm, interesting way to end it.
    I give it my seal of approval
    *whips out this frisbee sized golden stamp and slams it on the story, leaving behind this yellow mark of a lemon with a crown on it*

    I absolutley loved the whole story and I'm glad to see that...nearly...everyone came to a happy end.
    Personally, I'm hoping Adonis and Axel get back together *crosses fingers*
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  • From ANON - AJAngelique on March 31, 2004
    *HIGH PITCHED SQUEAL*
    OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG!!!!!
    YES!
    Alice finally foudn out how Chesirte feels about her and everyone lived happily ever after!
    I'm so happy!!!...
    well, almost everyone 8he he he* Poor White Rabbit...mmm tasty
    *evil laughter and skip soff to read the next ficcie*
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  • From ANON - PrincessLemon on March 29, 2004
    WOAH! So THAT'S how it all started.
    Oh! I hope Alice lives through this *prays despertly*

    As your princess, I command you to work on c17!!!
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  • From ANON - AJAngelique on March 29, 2004
    OMG! POOR ALICE! I feel for her man because I went through a similar experience. I was molested at a young age but my parental units confronted the guy and and he denied everything so they belived him!!! *growls*

    I loved C16 and can't wait to see the next chapter. Please let Alice live.
    Please Please Please Please Please Please!!!
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  • From ANON - PrincessLemon on March 28, 2004
    Ooooo! Care Bears, I have that video you know. If I can rig up my vcrs I can make a copy of it for anyone who wants one *big grin*

    I loved Chpt 15 and it was very mean of you to leave us in a cliff hanger like that.
    Even so, the Queen must be stopped before she ruins everything. *growls*

    Personally, I think Adonis and Alice should stay in WOnderland. I don't see anything in the real world for them and I think Axel really does love Adonis. He just has a little tourble...ok, a lot of trouble...showing it. And when will Alice learn thatv Chesire loves her? huh? huh?

    Well, enough pestering.
    As your princess, I command you to write the next chapter!!!
    *passes out from lack of sleep*
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  • From ANON - AJAngelique on March 28, 2004
    WHAT!? Did somebody say Care Bears!? *HIGH PITCHED SQUEAL*...actually, if I wasn't half awake that's what I'd be doing right now *sones off*.

    I absolutely love part 15 and can't wait for the next part. *walks off like a depraved zombie to bed

    Oklahoma, 12:13 am
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  • From ANON - Sailor Aurora on March 26, 2004
    Indigo, I did research... but There is such a thing called BEING CREATIVE, you know.
    This is my own verison of Alice, and I can write the family history any way I want to make this fit my own verison. I never said that the backgrounds were true, did I? No, it's purely for enterainment purposes and to explain some of the plots.

    After all, it's also called Artistic License. All you have to do is relax, enjoy the story... But if you're a stickler for the oringal and so called "rules".. there is other stories out there that you can read, without getting offended. But then again, Most of the stories on Adultfanfiction.net are Fanfiction.. meaning stories created by other people to suit thier own puropses, even distorting the oringal to get the desired effect to make an enjoyable story.
    You better go somewhere else, then.
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  • From ANON - indigo on March 25, 2004
    Nice try, but Alice was, in fact, a real girl. Her last name was Lidell, and she formed a friendship from age 7 to 10 with an eccentric adult named Charles Lutwidge Dodgson (who later made use of the pen name Lewis Carroll). Dodgson wrote Alice In Wonderland as a gift to Alice Lidell, whom he harbored a pedophiliac sexual attraction to (only one of many little girls he photographed in the nude as "artistic portraits"). Alice Lidell was married in 1880 and became Alice Liddel Hargreaves, and bore three sons. Charles Dodgson never married and died childless.

    It's called research. Try it sometime!

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  • From ANON - PrincessLemon on March 18, 2004
    *hisses in pain with each shock/scream of pain* I feel so sorry for poor Alice and that was a very enlightening way to explain the orgisn of the Queen of Hearts. ok fok forward to c15.
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  • From ANON - AJAngelique on March 18, 2004
    *gasps and drops jaw* Woah! I never would have thought! You go girl!!! Loved c14 and can't wait for c15!!!
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  • From ANON - PrincessLemon on March 15, 2004
    "The Queen Still At Large! Stay away from the Castle"
    If Adonis could only read backwards.

    No!!! Ok, I understand why Time had to tell Adonis this but Axel is really falling in love with him! Grrrr, damn it!!!!
    And poor Alice, you SO have to save her.
    And that Catapillar. WOOF!

    As your Princess, I command you to write the next part!!!
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  • From ANON - AJAngelique on March 15, 2004
    ...as I was ranting...

    I SO WANT TO SEE WHAT HAPPENS NEXT!
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  • From ANON - AJAngelique on March 15, 2004
    OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG!!!! I never knew!an;tan;t believe!
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  • From ANON - dvd on March 14, 2004
    worth waiting for! keep it up!
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