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Reviews for Awakenings

By : KimberlyA
  • From ANON - Sarah on March 17, 2004
    This was actually a really beautiful story. Thank you so much for writing it, Peter Pan has always been one of my favorite stories, and even though I know it's a blasphemy to say, I think your ending is better, and makes me feel sad in a very sentimental and melancholy way. Oh boy, now I'm sounding like a crazy person! Thanks again!
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  • From ANON - Pallas on March 16, 2004
    Very realistic, and also very sweet! When I first read this story as a child, I always felt a bit soror Por Peter, as he was always looking for a 'mother' (even though he had the Lost Boys). To me, he seemed lonely. And the way you brought Peter and Wendy together, while still keeping them in character, but most of all, innocent, seems like a very fitting end, certainly to me!
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  • From ANON - MistressofDragons on March 11, 2004
    I'm impressed. I usually don't read het because after the first few it is incredibly boring. of course yaoi(two guys) tends to be a tad boring on occasion as well and i've only ever found one yuri(two girls) that was even palatable. This however is extremely well written and realistic. cheers for realism! i try to write realism but that generally doesn't make to the sex scenes. . . just the relationships. but then i write angst. . . alot. . .

    and i know what you mean about the no reviews thing. my most recent story, "The Knife-Edge" has over a hundred hits and only one review. . . it's sad really. . . not that i was expecting it to be well liked. it's a chronicle of severe child abuse. but it would seem that it is well liked from the number of hits, just not the reviews. . . *sigh* i'm babbling. . .

    so i'll leave you to your wonderful and realistic writing. . . ja mata!
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  • From ANON - tygris on March 11, 2004
    Yay for peter pan het! I couldn't sleep and wound up finding your story. I juat want to say it's awesome and I am eagerly awaiting the rest!
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