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Reviews for Old Enemies

By : Alzadea
  • From butabara on January 17, 2011
    This desperately needs a part 2!
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  • From brainfear on March 03, 2010
    Well done. One critique though? It was hard to read with the story being all jumbled up together. Spaces between paragraphs would've been helpful.

    Thanks for posting this though!
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  • From IlDolceSuono on September 08, 2009
    I have ALWAYS been enamored of this pair! I came on this site today specifically searching for such a pairing and here you gave it to me. There are a few typos that should be fixed but its well written enough to not distract. Well done!
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  • From YamiVixen on December 23, 2007
    I miss this story and it's sequel. I wish you hadn't let franbrat asshats make you feel so bad about it. You have amazing talent and the sequel was going so well. I miss you. *huggles* I haven't had any desire to read anything in the FR section since you left. You really have me hooked on your Catti/Artemis. It's so much cooler then the canon. I wish you'd come back. *Sob*
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  • From Omicronus on August 20, 2006
    ...Well, it wasn't what I expected at all, for starters...

    To continue, it was very well-written, though, of course, we can blame your lack of italics and paragraphs, as well as some spelling and grammatical errors, to uploading. The epilogue wasn't as corny as you might make it out to be.

    The whole story was really something else, though. I'm pretty sure Artemis would bring the submissive girl out in any chick he decides to sleep with. Oddly enough, it seems right to have set those two up. Reading all these Drizzt series adult fanfics is giving me some ideas for my own. Keep up the good work!
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  • From ANON - Kara on February 08, 2006
    Yum. More????? Please?????????
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  • From ANON - Alzadea on September 13, 2005
    @Kira, yes, the sequal does exsist, or at least two chapters of it thus far at Lavender Eyes and fanfiction.net.
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  • From ANON - Kira on September 11, 2005
    >w< YESH! I've been looking for a ArtemisxCatti and now I have found one!! Thank you oh so much~!! And that sequel you mentioned....ever coming out?
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  • From ANON - Magick on November 12, 2004
    Very well written. I have to admit that I was skeptical at first, I mean, Catti/Artemis? Still, the novelty of the pairing won me over, and I gave it a read. Well, Im very gl did did! I have searched the web for anything else with this pairing, but to no avail. How sad... I mean, I like Drizzt (go drow!) but my opinion of him has diminished during the Hu's B's Blade trilogy. This pairing is just what the doctor ordered. Please write more, and email me when you do! You have me hooked!!
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  • From ANON - Gardengrrl13 on October 16, 2004
    Gotta say, this was very well writtenand thought out. I have been a fan for years and years and this, I think, sd true tue to the characters. I remember wondering about these two in the same scene you mentioned earlier between Artemis and Catti-Brie. I am very impressed! Hope there's a sequel... keep writing!
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  • From ANON - Kate on September 21, 2004
    Terrible, TERRIBLE couple. But you know what? Highly amusing, well written. Somewhat believable. Nice job. :)
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  • From on June 13, 2004
    Interesting pairing; you definitely don't hear of this one too often. Then again, I haven't heard of Artemis being involved romantically -- or sexually -- with anyone, for that matter.
    One suggestion I might make is that Cattie-Brie is a little off-character. This, however, isn't a huge problem considering she has grown and may be -- from how you made it out to be -- a little confused as to who she really is.
    The story itself is wonderfully written and well thought out. It made for a very exciting read.
    Please, do continue writing. I believe I speak for all of us when I say that doing so would make our day a bit more interesting. =)
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  • From akumu on May 02, 2004
    i love this story. no other way to put it. sorry you some less then pleasant reviews on lavander eyest itt it is a truely odd coupling by other standards, expecially with your excuse for drizzt being gone(from what i've read anyway)
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  • From ANON - Rae on April 28, 2004
    Wah! You are terrible, absolutely TERRIBLE?! How could you just end it just like that?! OMG.. *fans herself* You really MUST finish this. When I first opened the story, I was really skeptical. misxmisxCatti-brie.... ehhh... I've never been a fan of Catti, but damn girl, I'll take your version of her anyday, and Entreri as well. Well done!! Email me when you finish it, please! I really, really, hope you continue on with this pairing.
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  • From ANON - suzeann on April 10, 2004
    I hope you decide to
    continue this great
    story! Drizzt should
    find out about those
    two!
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