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Reviews for wonderland

By : indigo
  • From ANON - myladymystere on August 16, 2005
    love Jason and I feel he has depths that are left unexplored in the books. You wrote this well though the last paragrph could have been a little longer :)
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  • From ANON - Snaperñ¦er on July 17, 2003
    Umm... didn't I read this scene in Blue Moon? I mean, it's a great scene and all, just not terribly original. However, I do think you write very well and I would've liked to read a different nightmare scene for Jason.
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  • From ANON - Ilondrial on February 07, 2003
    Hey hun. I'm sure i read this before but it's good to have a recap. Can't wait for the you-know-what to happen. I'd forgot it'd all be in Anita's POV. Always is though. Love the website too. Must do something about mine some day. *sigh*
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  • From ANON - farewell on February 04, 2003
    *sigh* just what i needed. lovely. thank you so much. poor jason. the only critique i have is that it was a lot like that scene in the book. i think if you expanded on it, it could be much better. make it your own, add your own scenes and thoughts in it. are you going to continue it? i would love to see more, especially the part with nathaniel and jason. yummy. more please. i want some more. :D

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  • From ANON - mariteri on February 03, 2003
    Good start! I like the cliffhanger. It's a great way to build tention. I can't wait for more. Keep writing!
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