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Reviews for Bad Obsession

By : Bishiesaremyne
  • From ANON - Adnexus Confatalis on August 06, 2006
    LOL, my nick name's Mimi ^_^ i have black hair, but brown eyes. Good story so far!
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  • From ANON - emeraldfire on January 13, 2006
    Wendy would have lived during the early 1900's, right at the turn of the century. She would have only been your great-great grandmother assuming you are in your teens........ Keep going.........
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  • From ANON - lay on November 16, 2005
    cool i like it dont worry i hate wendy as well i dont why ANYWAY keep righting
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  • From ANON - lay on November 16, 2005
    cool i like it dont worry i hate wendy as well i dont why ANYWAY keep righting
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  • From ANON - devilbunny on September 14, 2005
    You should continue with this. Good start!
    It seems that Wendy had an obsession of her own judging from Mimi's dark hair and blue eyes. If you get my meaning. I bet there's more to that story in her journal.
    Wendy's diary could break Peter's heart and Mimi would be there to pick up the pieces. ;-)
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  • From ANON - Ray on April 30, 2005
    It's a good start even tho you don't like Wendy. Looking forward to your next chapter.

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  • From ANON - DarkMystic on March 05, 2005
    Man that chapter was so freaking short. But it was good, I hope to see more when you update.
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  • From ANON - anni on February 02, 2005
    you have excelent skills when writing. no funkey words in the wrong place and relativley well thaught charichter developement. but i would look into your spelling. (im a Hippocrite=notice the selling...= but i was hoping a little constructive criticism will help.) keep up the good work looking forward to reading the rest.
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  • From ANON - Emeraldfire on June 13, 2004
    Good start. You had quite a few typos using she when you meant he. Also wendy was probably Mimi's Great Great Grandmother. 4 greats is a bit much. I'm 32 and my great great grandmother lived as a teen in the 1860's. I suspect the story of peterpan was in the late 1800's or even right at the turn of the century. I don't mean to nitpick. You have great potential! Keep writing!
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  • From ANON - Lady Lestat on May 22, 2004
    Yep Wendy sucks, continue.
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