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Reviews for Return to the Garden

By : MollieWoods
  • From ANON - Anon on January 05, 2006
    Hey! I just wanted to tell you I think this is a great story! I hope you haven't really stopped writing it. I love how you characterize the different people. I'm sure Mary and Colin will have some (fun-to-read) fights in the future... :D
    Please continue!
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  • From ANON - marz on February 24, 2005
    i wish you'd kept writing this ... i mean, i *guess* i could try to imagine the rest of your synopsis on my own, but i like a good story. and this is a really good beginning. any hope of completion or continuation? i know it's been six months since you updated, but still ...
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  • From ANON - Brittany on November 26, 2004
    Really good story! don't stop
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  • From ANON - Needleinthehay on August 19, 2004
    This is pretty good. You need a little more setup of the story, but for a first chapter it's pretty nice. Is it meant to be a very short story? Because by the time we get to the end of the first chapter, they're already kissing, so I wondered if it's just going to be a very short story in the end. Also, Mary is 2 years younger than Dic not not three. I suppose there may be some time in there when she is 14 and he's 17, though, so you may get away with that. :) What are the rest of the family doing off in France? Where is Martha? Surely she isn't off to France, too? Mrs. Medlock -- is she is France as well? Where is Dickon living and what's his life like? Tell me more!
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