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Reviews for When the Moon Rises

By : ozumasgirl
  • From ANON - pixi on September 17, 2005
    the story isn't bad. You need to work on your spelling and grammer though. Its very distracting when you get your there/their and your/you're messed up.
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  • From ANON - vivien on September 16, 2005
    whick opening? upper or lower?
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  • From ANON - Lizzie on September 02, 2005
    omgosh that was so sad. plz write more ASAP and make it a lil happy
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  • From ANON - Anon on August 22, 2005
    I agree with the comment above, and dear god do you need help with your punctuation. That story was horribly depicted, and your grammar is..to say the least, miserable. Work on it some more, and try using your computers spell check or something.
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  • From ANON - Anon on July 25, 2005
    Have you no clue as to the difference between the possessive and the plural? Please, get some basic knowledge of English grammar before you attempt to write anything further.
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  • From ANON - Vicki on May 05, 2005
    That was so sad..... Liked it though
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  • From ANON - Em on May 04, 2005
    Oh, that was sad, but arousing do write more
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  • From ANON - Aurora Moon on April 27, 2005
    Pretty good.... although I feel sad for that boy...That Olaf, I can't help but hate him more than ever.

    You did a good job of depicting the characters, and the scenes were written very good. So I think you pass as a rather good writer.. so that's what really counts, even if not many people would like this sort of thing..

    I usually don't go for rape stories, they're not my cup of tea but for some reason I just had to read this. ^^;;
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  • From ANON - Nny11 on April 10, 2005
    I'm glad you were able to use this site for your fic! And it's still as good as I remeber it.
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  • From ANON - Lena on March 27, 2005
    That was brillant, I read this on fanfiction.net, where you cut out the graphic parts, and I thought it was brillant then. Now it is a work of art! Not many writers can write such details and make it sound good, without grossing the readers out, but you had a fine balance and you let your readers feel sympathy for Klaus. I love it! You are brillant!
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  • From ANON - Mena on March 22, 2005
    Heya, I'm not really into slashiness much so I didn't read all of the slashy bits but I wanted to encourage you and let you know your writing is good and also I'm glad you wrote an ASOUE fic because there's just not enough of them here and it's always good to see something fresh and new. I hope you will continue writing:) This is very good for a first fic.
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