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Reviews for Alice in new wonderland

By : englishwitch2003
  • From Katarina_Silversong on November 18, 2016

    I absolutely loved it, and wish I knew if she had a sweet ending with either Kappu or Chester (preferably Chester, but I'm biased towards human versions of the Cheshire Cat). I am happy she found her replacement, and that she didn't have to wait for over two decades for the next Story Keeper. As it is now 2016, I know this most likely will not happen, but maybe a sequel depicting how life is for Alice after she's been replaced as Story Keeper? Or Liam's adventures as the new Story Keeper?


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  • From doubledamn on September 02, 2013
    This is an interesting take on the story. You seem to have taken inspiration from Terry Pratchett's 'Discworld' series, with the whole "The ruler is one with the land and the land is one with the ruler" thing, simply put the land reflects the current ruler. As long as the ruler cares for the land, it will flourish, if with certain 'personality' changes. Regardless I look forward to the rest of this series. Well done.
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  • From ANON - AeonFlux4444 on July 11, 2012
    You should sign as englishwizardyou are male or not?
    You know, you write as precocious little girl, and see why signatures like this.
    If you really were a male, would your fic with more determination not so bland.
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  • From Evania on February 28, 2010
    That was absolutely fantastic. I loved the story, especially its writing and progression. You're very talented.
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  • From InkHeart17 on March 14, 2009
    Outstanding story! It was all so exciting, arousing, and adventerous. I loved the ending.
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  • From InkHeart17 on February 19, 2009
    Oh this is wonderful! Chapter two reveals a very logical plot as far as wonderland goes. You write very well!
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  • From Tahn on February 12, 2009
    Well done! I once read this a long time ago but it wasn't finished at the time and I was upset by this. I hate getting into a great story and not being able to finish it. Now I have though and I've gotta say, excellent job!
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  • From ANON - Samara on January 13, 2009
    Ho-le, wow. Incredible. I can't even go into why. imagery, emotion, flow, characterization...amazing. You, my dear, have a gift. don't waste it. You're going to be great some day.
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  • From TheRavenEmerald on February 22, 2008
    Holy crap... that was a beautifully awesome story! The sex was hot as hell, the drama was intense, and the world was believable! You wrote a truly amazing epic. I enjoyed the epilogue, with Alice finding her successor. Have you ever considered writing a collection of short stories involving small adventures from Kata's, Morgana's, and Alexia's points of view? Epically cool, that would be. Bravo

    --Raven
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  • From covetous on November 24, 2007
    I absolutely love your story... My only criticism is that you mention all the women's breast sizes too often. I mean we can pretty much gather that every female in wonderland has generously sized breasts by chapter six.
    Other than that, your creativity is simply magnificent. Thank you so much for sharing this with us!
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  • From AJAngelique on June 01, 2007
    omg omg omg omg omg omg!
    it's all over with *weeps*
    alice became the new story keeper but no one knows it's her now *weepes*
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  • From AletaRois on April 20, 2007
    This has really been a wonderful story you've created. Though I was apprehensive at first, it has really grown in depth. I do hope that you continue.
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  • From JLucPitard on March 22, 2007
    I must say that this is the weirdest, yet sweetest stories I've read in a long time. Surreal sex and a plot? I'll take it!
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  • From AJAngelique on February 19, 2007
    c17
    ...wow!
    please updated soon1 i wanna know if alice survives, and what's up with that one guy wanting to protect her?
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  • From ANON - AJAngelqiue on December 17, 2006
    *snorts* i like that last line thw best
    please update soon!
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