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Reviews for Alice in new wonderland

By : englishwitch2003
  • From ANON - AJAngelique on June 09, 2006
    YES! THE STORY CONTINUES!
    AWESOME! It took a moment to realize what was going on but I like you made what happened after the last chapter a dream/memory for Alice as she was healing.

    Maybe Alice can trust her caretaker and explain what's going on and get some help on her quest?
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  • From ANON - cyn on January 30, 2006
    wow, for my first Alice fic this is amazing and just wow! I will have to remember to come back and check on your progress.
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  • From ANON - digital blaspemy on January 26, 2006
    just an afterthought, but i seem to remember the general term for the spider-woman is a "drider" dunno who came up with that idea
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  • From ANON - digital blasphemy on January 26, 2006
    holy shit!!! o.O
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  • From ANON - Lina on December 13, 2005
    Me thinks Alice is sooo majorly screwed. Woman... er, in this case, arachnid scorned and all that.
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  • From ANON - Jackaniny on November 09, 2005
    I'm loving the story so far. Definitely worth reading.
    Can't wait for the next chapter(which will be soon I hope?).
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  • From ANON - arliquin on October 29, 2005
    WOW, soo sorry...wrong story. ^_^; Anyway...your story is a little vulger...are you a chic, or a dude? The hourse thing was creepy...but I give you credit for haveing a spider chic...that was kinda cool.Oh, and what's with the green indians? (native what evers) I don't like the fact that alice is a sex crazed, blond, big boobed fool...it's just not creative...sadly. Past all that, the plot is like creative smut...but at least you through some kind of plot in it. -_-
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  • From ANON - arliquin on October 29, 2005
    I liked the story, it was prety good. Oooooooo, and Adonis is sooo CUTE! ^_^ froths because, of soiled mind.
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  • From ANON - AJ Angelique on October 27, 2005
    woah!
    frying pan yo fire i supose
    interesting chapter though...

    WRITE MORE!!!!
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  • From ANON - Lily on October 15, 2005
    wow awesome story keep it up!!
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  • From ANON - AJAngelique on September 27, 2005
    OH WOW! You're doing a beautiful job on this story!
    WRITE MORE!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Pancake on September 25, 2005
    That was.... decent. I apologise, but you will discover I am a harsh critic.

    There was a lack of detail that made things hard to keep up with. The detail did indeed shift, and it was easy to distinguish the parts that you felt were your favorites, and thus deserving of more text, versus the parts that you cared less about.

    All in all, however, it was well written. This much is true, for I usually won't read anything that isn't well written.
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  • From ANON - Sheilaya on August 25, 2005
    I [b]LOVED[/b] it!
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  • From ANON - Grace on August 25, 2005
    THAT... WAS... AMAZING!!!!!
    Please, Please, Please Write more! I beg of you! The horse thing was especially hot ;)
    -Grace
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  • From ANON - AJAngelique on August 23, 2005
    I agree with you englishwitch, if people don't like something they shouldn't read it. *sighs*
    Still, bonus points for sex with the new character. Can't wait to see what happens next.
    Will we get to see any other of the old wonderland characters? Chesire Cat perhaps?
    Please please please please!
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