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Reviews for Misplaced Affections

By : Moonstalk
  • From MickeyDee on May 11, 2010
    So far I'm really enjoying this story for the characterizations, but I'm hoping the pace will pick up in the next chapter.
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  • From on July 25, 2007
    Hey this is a great start to a story. I can't wait for more!!
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  • From on July 22, 2007
    im captivated, please write more. my only criticism is that there was no dialogue in this chapter, just narration. i understand that the first chapter is where the plot and characters are set up, but keep dialogue in mind for chapter two. id luuuuuuuuuurve to read a back-and-forth between a confused, adolescent charlie and a barely-restrained wonka. yummyness.... so yeah, more chapters!!!
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  • From sodapop0006 on July 22, 2007
    This looks like the start of a good story. I'm interested in seeing where you go with this, and I can't wait to see how the birthday party will go. :D
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