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Reviews for Kushiel's Pupil

By : Seraphis
  • From ANON - Jennifer on June 04, 2009
    I was so glad to see a update!!!! Anxiously I check...so few good fanfics of this book!!
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  • From ANON - ContessaNatasha on May 10, 2009
    Hey, any chance you will be updating again, or has this story been given up on?
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  • From ANON - sayyadina on September 06, 2008
    I absolutely love this story, and adore Anafielle.

    My only complaint is the length of the wait for new chapters.

    MORE!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Monet on September 04, 2008
    THis was a delightful read. I enjoy ana's charactor and the idea of another full circle of a montreve and sharazi family ,e,ber co,ing together again.
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  • From ANON - Jen on August 18, 2008
    I really enjoyed reading this story so far! Is it still a work in progress? I hope so :)
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  • From andarte on July 29, 2008
    Excellent work! I'm eagerly awaiting the next chapter!
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  • From ANON - Kat on July 28, 2008
    Was glad to see that you posted, i was afraid since you hadnt in so long you had quit with this story. Like i said before if you have more im very interested in reading it. I think your doing a great job keeping with her writing style. Keep it up :)
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  • From ANON - Kat on July 23, 2008
    I recently found your story, im not sure if you are going to keep writing, but i wanted to let you know i thought your writing was excellant, i honestly felt i was reading an extension of the kushiel books. if you have more i would love to read them. I think you captured the soul of the characters, Very Well done again :)
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  • From ANON - Thelesis on June 23, 2008
    I love this story so far - the tone and characterizations are so true to the books. (Good luck, though, keeping it consistent with Kushiel's Mercy!) I'm always a sucker for next-generation stories, too, especially ones that are told so well.

    One tiny nitpick: when Imri and Anafielle are racing, you write that Imri carries a forty pound sword. Swords are practically always considerably lighter than that - broadswords (two handed weapons) weigh around four pounds usually. Just letting you know :)
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  • From ANON - sarah on June 17, 2008
    Excellent! I am now totally absorbed in Ana's adventures - so please, please update. I need to know what happens.
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  • From ANON - Say on April 30, 2008
    Excellent story. I love Anafielle.

    More, soon, please!!!
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  • From ANON - LaniLovitz on April 24, 2008
    OH MY HEAVENS.
    This fanfic has literally made my day. I was halfway through the second chapter when I was catching myself already saying, "HOLY SHIT THIS STORY IS SOOOO GOOOD!!!" Out loud, mind you. Everyone is in character, and you've created a new daughter which I actually imagine can fit well into this universe. I cannot express how disappointed I am that there are only eight chapters! I wish you to continue, and I am looking forward to your updates!
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  • From ANON - Kopijka4 on April 19, 2008
    I really like your story--it's believable and the characters you've created are like real people. Please keep going with it. Thanks.
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  • From ANON - M. on March 22, 2008
    This is a very good story--and it's no small task, in my view, to write fanfic responding to Jacqueline Carey's world. A few things are odd (why would Phedre teach her daughter zenyan? if Phedre was given the right to raise Anafielle, wh, then, is she vexed that Anafielle has not been taught the graces?) but overall it's very, very good, and I'm looking forward to more chapters!
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  • From ANON - Kopijka4 on March 08, 2008
    I like the story! The relationship between Taurus and Ana seem to be natural; keep writing, I'd like to see what happens next, especially when she goes to court and Alba.
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