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Reviews for Greener Grass

By : MoonlightSparkle
  • From jaymebaby1988 on August 30, 2009
    i wish you would add some more:-(...im love this story
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  • From stbroeke on August 20, 2009
    All I can say is: MORE PLEASE!!!!!!! This is me begging you for an update :)
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  • From Sekhmet on August 18, 2009
    YUM!!! More please?!
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  • From InfernalParadise on August 14, 2009
    P.S.: I hate Mike.

    Not only did he interrupt the most promising smut, no, he was also switching the TV channel to Spongebob Squarepants. What a moron... :(
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  • From InfernalParadise on August 14, 2009
    You know what? Probably the hottest erotic moment without proper smut. Wow! Again, I'm afraid I need to become a doctor in that hospital... we can't allow Bella to have all the fun by herself, can we?? ;)

    Looking forward to the drama. Will Jacob be punched by Edward? I mean, really badly?? Hehe. ;P
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  • From ANON - nicoleyosis90 on August 08, 2009
    WOW CANT WAIT FOR THE NEXT POST....I LOVE IT !!!!!
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  • From luannfeld on August 07, 2009
    Hot! How dare Mike to walk in on them! Well, I suppose it was a blessing Mike was too oblivious to realize what was going on.
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  • From ANON - ReddTwilight on August 05, 2009
    Great chapter, I loved the little tease that they got to have in the break room. Can't wait for the next chapter!!! :)
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  • From luannfeld on August 03, 2009
    Good for Bella! That took a lot of moral fiber and courage in the face of the heat we were all feeling!
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  • From luannfeld on August 03, 2009
    Oh, how awkward! Here's a situation that many of us have been in, I'm sure, banging one guy while fantasizing about another - and feeling confused, guilty, and excited about it all at the same time. She may find she's got the serious hots for Edward, but may ultimately realize old, boring Jacob's the one she's really compatible with in reality (that is, if we can forget this is the Twilight series, after all, and that she's meant to be with Edward). But in the meantime, this makes for some hot, steamy smut!
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  • From InfernalParadise on July 31, 2009
    Hey, don't worry... we don't want you to have a burnout syndrome because of us. ;)
    As for me, I'll just sit here, patiently, waiting for an update and rereading what you've posted so far (which isn't bad at all). Anticipation is the greatest pleasure, isn't it? So don't worry and don't stress yourself! :)
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  • From jaymebaby1988 on July 22, 2009
    what happened? i miss reading this story? lol
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  • From ANON - webejammin on July 17, 2009
    do i foresee an udate in the oncoming horizon?
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  • From ANON - fujinakaheero on July 14, 2009
    just a question... why is it that there is no mention of any contraception or protection being used when Bella has sex?
    She is a woman after all and the people she is having sex with are all male... who apparently cum in her every time.
    Honestly, people can't just slip it in every time and then not get pregnant unless they were infertile or they were using protection.
    This is the one thing that is bugging me about this story so far.

    It's a good story overall... but man.. I'm 19 years old and even I know you use birth control, or condoms when or if you plan to have sex with a guy.
    Safety first is what is usually taught. And with them being doctors... they would know all this.
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  • From InfernalParadise on July 13, 2009
    Ugly break-up scene, yet greatly written. *wants to smack Jacob really hard...*
    I very much enjoyed those moments between Bella and Edward when they got to know more about each other. It was both sweet and just adorable. :)
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