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Reviews for Prelude

By : belladonnacullen
  • From dinloth on April 13, 2010
    I enjoyed your story immensely. I love that it's not a usual "fuck fuck and a bit more of a detailed fuck" story xD It's not fun. Well, not for me. Your story was a perfect mix of action and smut. I thought that I might be skipping the action parts but to be honest I was waiting for them! :) All the love scenes where Edward and Bella experimented with each other, were very nicely written. If I was to complain about anything I would say that the first encounters could have been more detailed. But it's just me I guess :D You know what's the best about this story? That it has a continuation! So happy about it :D Right now I'm gonna start reading it :) I'll review it after reading. See you then :D
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  • From Sekhmet on October 02, 2009
    Please continue!!! It's awesome!!!
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  • From luannfeld on September 20, 2009
    I just love this story! It has the right combination of adventure, fluff, and lemons I'm really looking forward to the rest of this story.
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  • From AtheneCKM28 on September 15, 2009
    Please please please continue this. All the obnoxious implications are resolved in your writing, and I think you could weave the honeymoon into a heart wrenching work of art. I practically take your stories as the truth of what happened between the gaps, and I'm DYING to read about the burst pillows. So again, pleasepleaseplease continue!!!
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  • From KathrynH on September 09, 2009
    I would like to see an epilogue with the details of the wedding itself, and of course maybe a one-shot of the wedding night, like you did for their 'practicing'. I also just want to say that you've improved your writing skills greatly since the beggining of this story, in my opinion. It went from feeling like I was reading a regular, albeit talented, fanfic writer, to having more of the feel of reading a true author. I'm terribly sorry I didn't get the chance to review more regularly, but I eagerly awaiting each update. Thank you for telling a beautiful story!

    p.s.- I also absolutely loved your lil telling of their 'practice', I seriously almost raped my man that night! LOL! (disclaimer-I do not participate in, nor do I condone rape...but it's fun to think about sometimes!)

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  • From hallee87 on September 07, 2009
    I love this story! I find it hilarious that Edward was getting a little case of cold feet somewhat. That was funny about what Emmett was doing. Great job with the chapter! Hope your vacation is going well and can't wait to see the next chapter!
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  • From AtheneCKM28 on August 22, 2009
    This story is so amazingly true to the original text's that when I read the books, I get events from your story confused with the real ones. You're awesome...PleasePleasePLEASE finish this!


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  • From KathrynH on August 13, 2009
    I love the frustrated "Oh, for the love of all that is Holy!" Poor Edward, not to mention poor Jas and Em when he finds out about their trip. Ooo, can't wait!
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  • From luannfeld on August 09, 2009
    OK, where's the rest of the story? Please update soon! I love the way you let us see everyone's thoughts, most stories I've read don't let us inside Emmett's or Rosalie's head. And I loved all of Alice's confessions in that last chapter! I do love Alice, she's the best. I'm really looking forward to your take on the wedding - and the honeymoon...
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  • From luannfeld on August 09, 2009
    I LOVE Ch 12's ending of how Edward would most certainly climb through her bedroom window anyway!
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  • From luannfeld on August 09, 2009
    Um, I'm confused. In Ch. 8 Emmett ripped Valentino's head from his body as Valentino had talked badly about Bella. So how is he alive again in Ch. 10?
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  • From luannfeld on August 08, 2009
    Just read Ch. 7, still loving it!
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  • From luannfeld on August 08, 2009
    Love the dream in Ch. 5 and its resolution when Edward returns and reassures her.
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  • From luannfeld on August 08, 2009
    Good start to the story, I think I'm already hooked! (Just read Ch. 1.)
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  • From linnamedeiros on August 04, 2009
    YAY alice is so funny ^^ Loved the chapter X) Cant wait to read the next one !!!!!!!! ED & Bella please ahuahuahau *dirty mind* =p


    observation:
    SORRY! T_T but i was writting so fast on the last review that i didn't post the correction right.. yeah i'm stupid... i'm so sorry for that -.-

    anyway:

    "Quero A vida sempre assim
    Com voce perto de mim
    E eu que era TRISTE
    DESCRENTE deste mundo
    Ao encontrar voce eu conheci
    O que é a felicidade, meu amor"

    man i am useless.. really sorry for not making it right the firt time! (only noticed today, while re-reading the chapie "last night 3")

    Again: LOVE YOU FANFIC!! please keep up the wonderfull work! =^.^=
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