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Reviews for Ineluctable

By : DaggersApprentice
  • From datoichii on December 04, 2009
    Ahh! Amazing~ Part two was just as awesome as part one, but maybe better because there was a pleasurable lack of clothing at the end.


    And you're right! Now I owe you some more from mine as well. I'll get right on that and hopefully it won't take me too terribly long.
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  • From ANON - Satine Nuit on November 19, 2009
    Wow. This is just...wow.
    I think what I liked most was that you somehow managed to keep both Artemis and Butler in character - their reactions, their behaviour towards one another. I like how you kept Artemis his ususal dominant self yet managed to realistically convey Butler being on top. I don't think I've read anything remotely similar and so realistic and well done.
    I also liked Artemis's age being 24, rather than in his teens. It speaks of experience that would allow him to act in the way that he did. I doubt the story would have been as good if he'd been 17 or 18 or something.
    Also, Butler's thoughts and mental commentary - hilarious.
    Plus the steamy sex - bravo. Very nicely written!
    Thanks for writing and sharing, this is truly a gem in a fandom which sadly doesn't have nearly enough high-quality A/B fics.
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  • From ANON - unknown20troper on November 17, 2009
    Awesome!

    Great characterization! Hot! Romantic! Amazing use of analogies - that applies to all your stories, of course!

    Great chapter!

    Great story!

    P.S- Please update "Three Wishes" soon! I do like it, even though your characterization of the Tooth Fairy wasn't as canon compliant as I would have liked. Yes, I'm a total geek for wanting you to be canon compliant to Fairly OddParents, but hey, I like being a total geek! Basically, please update "Three Wishes" soon! Please...

    About contacting:

    I'm on FanFiction.Net with the same name. You know, unknown20troper, who faved and reviewed Ineluctable, and put you on Author Alert and their fave author list.
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  • From VegaKapera on November 13, 2009
    This is one of the best stories I've read lately! It turns me into a giggling fangirl..
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  • From ANON - DracroX on November 12, 2009
    *looks back at his last review* lol man the spelling.....SEE WHAT YOUR WRITING DOES TO ME!!!
    lol But really, Your writing is some of the best I've seen. You capture the essence of Artemis and Butler, to the point of incredibility.
    You really seem to write them in the way the Auther did. In some ways even better. I absolutly adore your Butler. ^_^ He wants his charge so bad but he's tormented about it. lol Artemis doesnt help at all when he teases. *GUH* this new chappy was just awesome. Made my heart go *Thunka-thunka*. lol Anyway Here's another *HUGS*!

    Your Fan
    Ryan.
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  • From KitHeart on November 11, 2009
    Nom nom nom! Very good. I er...I'm gonna have issues, now. Thanks. A lot.
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  • From datoichii on November 09, 2009
    Oh you must write more! This one was very visual. I could amost picture myself on that beach (spying on them, though how I'd manage that without Butler noticing me I don't know..).

    I'll make a deal with you.. I'll finish my story (you reviewed one~~! one of my favorite authors~~ *spazzes a moment*) if you write more~ :)
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  • From ANON - Lizz on November 02, 2009
    Absolutely beautiful. Very in character. I definitely want another part.
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  • From ANON - KiaOfTheSand on October 17, 2009
    *happy sigh* ahhh...
    I'm not much of a reviewer, but how am I supposed to let someone know I'd like more if I don't speak up?
    *snort*
    This is very well written, everything well done... no smut, though... but I can live with that. :D
    Sorry if I'm a little incoherent... no more than a few hours of sleep and a yummy fanfiction spree can do that. I haven't even logged in... hm.
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  • From ANON - Anon on October 07, 2009
    Very hot. ^_~ And I really want to see Butler tear his shirt off...
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  • From ANON - Ms Samy X on September 22, 2009
    This is amazing. I just read your other two AF stories as well and I love how you've captured Artemis and Butler, and their relationship. And your language is just... Guh. Really hope to read more from you.
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  • From on August 17, 2009
    I liked the "finally" at the end. I also approve of the timeline change. Feel free to share more about their erffectively "new" past (though I suppose that's an oxymoron, no?). Exposition is good!

    I loved it, and I cannot wait for more. Email me when you post again?
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  • From ANON - Lee on August 07, 2009
    Oh, these two are so *wonderful* together, and this little fic is just...guh. Loved it, loved it, loved it! (and I'm sorry for the overabundance of omg fangirl in this, but you're one of about two writers that I've found that actually write good Butler/Artemis, and every time I find a new story I'm rendered fairly incoherant). It makes me so happy to know that I wasn't the only one wearing my slash goggles while reading this series ;)

    It's wonderful as it is, but being the selfish little girl I am, I'm also quite happy to take you up on your 'review=more fic' offer!
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