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Reviews for Life After Edward

By : marieriddle20
  • From ANON - maggie01 on August 21, 2016

    incredible story loved it :)


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  • From Kiwisrock on January 29, 2012
    Scratch that, THEY'RE ALL GULLIBLE!!! Why would they think that Bella would go & jump in the sack with jacob of all people!!! Dumbo's! Thanks!
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  • From Kiwisrock on January 29, 2012
    Alice is so gullible!!! Thanks!
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  • From Kiwisrock on January 29, 2012
    What a funny lie, "I ended up with this!" cool! Thanks
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  • From Kiwisrock on January 29, 2012
    That's so funny, "everybody hates E..." I'm glad Alice is there! Love the shortchapters because they're fast and easy to read and easier for you to write! Thanks
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  • From Kiwisrock on January 29, 2012
    I like this story, thanks for continuing it. Interested to see where we end up. Thanks
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  • From AlyssaImagine on June 20, 2010
    Overall, the story is pretty good. It's a bit rushed, as was already pointed out, so I won't go all that much into detail there. There was a few mistakes, especially after Nessie's birth, like how Bella would always refer to the baby as she and her daughter, but later on Edward said that she didn't know that yet, and tells her that she has a baby girl. Also, many parts were just like the books, and sped up too quickly. Really, though, for a first fanfiction this is really good, and I read your second one, so you're surely progressing.
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  • From InfernalParadise on September 15, 2009
    Frankly, I found chapter 16 really awesome. Bella trying to kill Edward... now that's a movie we'd all love to see one day. *lol* Poor, poor Edward... hehe

    "If you two don’t stop, I’m going to jump Alice right here” - probably the funniest line Jasper has ever delivered so far.

    The last two chapters may have been a tiny bit rushed, but hey, otherwise it was really lovely and a joy to read, so I don't mind. :)
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  • From InfernalParadise on September 15, 2009
    Count on Emmett to be hopelessly funny when everything’s deadly serious around him: “Are you trying to take us to Canada?!?!? I didn’t bring my passport! Do we need a passport to go into Canada?” Honestly, who doesn’t wish to have that guy’s worries?? *lol*

    The whole „marry me“ issue was really shitty, but also typical on Edward’s behalf. He really seems unable to think outside the box at times. I could easily understand Bella being so mad at him. You describe her inner struggle really well. :)

    I loved how Edward first heard the baby’s thoughts. They were just hilarious (“I need to get out. It’s time to get out.“). *lol* Seems to be a very rational baby. ;)

    Terrible cliff-hanger, though. ;P
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  • From astartelydianna on September 14, 2009
    i did enjoy this story and i loved that you started off doing your own twist on the books even though it ended up pretty much the same which is also ok. my only criticism is that everything seems a bit rushed. i know sometimes i have to go back and check what i've written because i get into the flow and then realise it could do with a bit more filling out. it just feels like once you get to the bella's pregnant and the cullen's find out about it part its bella's in trouble, edward comes in, bella has the baby, happy ending. do you know what i mean? i did enjoy the story though good job
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  • From KathrynH on September 14, 2009
    Whew, glad the confusion was settled. I figured there might have been a mistake in posting since I'm reading your other story as well and recognized the chapters.
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  • From juicycherry on September 14, 2009
    Okay hate to say this but your ending sounded just like the book. It was a little tooooo close. I ended up skipping half the last chapter. Would have been nice if it had been a little more original.
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  • From SandmansAngel on September 13, 2009
    This story was really good, and you did a really good job on it. I hope you could read mine; just to see if I did anything wrong to it.
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  • From Marti on September 12, 2009
    it seems like there's something missing. chapter 15 ended with bella in labor, and chapter 16 started with Nessie's thoughts. Your flow of the story seems to be off. You need to have something bridge the two totally different stories, really. as of what I remember from chapter 15, bella and edward hadn't even reconciled and you have them being happy loving mom and dad to Nessie. We all know how her birth in Breaking Dawn worked, but how did it go in your story? is that when Bella was turned, or was it later? You don't answer these questions.
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  • From KathrynH on September 12, 2009
    I'm confused. The last two chapters are from your other story. The jump ahead in time, without any explanation of how the Volturi got involved in this one it makes no sense, specially when you consider that Edward was there for Nessie's birth in this one, so he would have been there for her change. Not sure how you're going to merge the two.
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