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Reviews for All Grown Up: The Story of Jacob and Renesmee

By : VanessaWolfe
  • From ANON - Tari on July 21, 2010
    HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA okay its official, i'm in love. i love it. i love you, i love them. great writing! *chapter 6*
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  • From ANON - tari on July 21, 2010
    chapter five made me cry! :)
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  • From ANON - Anon on July 21, 2010
    I really love your sweet innocent portrayal of Renesmee. Just like in the book. Good job. They're really cute.
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  • From shuzrocks on July 18, 2010
    more pls! :)
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  • From shuzrocks on July 17, 2010
    just finished part 4 and am inthralled.... love it... just what i had in mind. :) can't wait to keep reading :)
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  • From lordoberon on June 28, 2010
    haha I can so see Edward having that car! More Alice really, though, doesn't she go for that sort? At first when I was reading this,having Jake and Edward not be rivals and have Edward seem older, weirded me out. But now I like it! I laughed with Edward lending Jacob the car and reading his thoughts and nodding. Jake and Nessie are so cute!
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  • From lordoberon on June 28, 2010
    Hahaha! Edward listening to Jacob and Nesmee's thoughts, that is so great. I like how you characterize Jacob, totally perfect. haha ABCDEFG, clever! good ol' Jake. I'm curious to see where this fic goes...
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  • From Mamacita on June 16, 2010
    you list chapter 13 on the pull-down menu as chapter 14. did 13 actually get skipped or is it just misnumbered?
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  • From ANON - swimmer1988 on April 27, 2010
    Excellent story Can not wait for a new chapter ;)
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  • From ANON - KadyRae on April 24, 2010
    Awesome! cant wait for the next one!
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  • From lenabear9 on April 22, 2010
    You labeled 13 as 14, but I want the real 14 soon!
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  • From ANON - Patricia Dixon on April 15, 2010
    PLEASE YOU NEED TO KEEP GOING! I love this story and CANT get enough! pleasae email me if you get another chapter up!
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  • From lenabear9 on March 22, 2010
    *laughs* great new chapter. Would LOVE to see Emmett ribbing poor Jake!
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  • From LadyDragonseeker on March 12, 2010
    more more more!!!
    I like it so far it seems to me this sticks to the general ideas of the book and are true to each person but I would sujest looking into gramer and when to make paragrahs just to improve the look and readablity of your work. (I have the same issue) Bassically the only time you need a new paragraph is with chages is subject (there can be exceptions to this if your doing several oppions on the same topic or such) or when someone is talking...and you put what they say in front even when writing in first person but I like it and you shoule keep at it!!
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  • From ANON - lenabear9 on March 11, 2010
    Very cute chapters. Seven soon!
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