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Reviews for The Horse and His Cock

By : JayDee
  • From pip on April 14, 2014
    Supremely absurd, and this bit had me laughing out loud:

    Had she known that the badger had given them an itching salve instead of the sex elixir, it is likely her fear would have been much greater.

    Wonderful, and good for giggle late at night.
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  • From ANON - Anon on April 14, 2014
    Ah, proper consummation at last! Of course, leave it to the Badger to be a bitch. Itching salve indeed...

    Wonderfully done, as ever, and glad to have you writing in the prompts again!
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  • From Roseykins on May 10, 2011
    Awesome! Hilarious! I love it. The greedy badger will keep me laughing for the next two weeks.
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  • From ANON - Anon on May 07, 2011
    Chapter 4

    I always enjoy a new Bree and Aravis chapter, and this one did not disappoint! I loved the dual (dueling?) definitions of frittle, and what are frittles without a badger? Or slug trails, for that matter? But I do wish Bree and Aravis much joy if they do indeed get their elixir!
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  • From Leloi on March 18, 2011
    Poor, sad, unloved Shasta... reduced to voyeurism.
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  • From ANON - Anon on March 18, 2011
    I really enjoy the Aravis and Bree tales immensely. There is a lovely quality of innocence in between the mighty cocks and pools of sperms, and the explorations into a young woman's burgeoning sexuality. And it's smut with a moral! What more could I ask? :D
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  • From ANON - Anon on March 04, 2011
    Ah, glad to see we get another taste of Aravis and Bree! An interesting way to take it to the next level, but it certainly makes sleep much more interesting! :D
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  • From FairySlayer on March 03, 2011
    21. Dream

    Thank goodness for the magic of dreams so that they could finally consummate their lust. (Love might be more of a stretch than if they tried having sex for real. ;)) Again, you did a fantastic jog describing all of the sexy details. It worked nicely after setting up a great way to make Aravis a bit more sexually aware via the horny Hermit and his mare.

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  • From pittwitch on January 21, 2011
    Roflmao -- if you only knew ... oh wait, that's only geldings. Stallions usually don't require, geez, never mind. Just never mind. Don't go there, mind. Don't go there, dammit.

    Only you, JayDee, could make me read a virgin girl/horse story and like it! I liked her innocence, and his reactions. Thank the gods real horses can't talk ...

    PW the disturbed
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  • From ANON - Anon on January 21, 2011
    This definitely gets my vote for the most creatively pornographic use of the prompt! And somehow, Aravis remains sweetly innocent, and utterly charming. Truly well done!
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  • From ApolloImperium on January 21, 2011
    You and horses I swear LOL! I like the contrast between her innocence and his knowledge and unwillingness to spoil her. It makes for a different take! I feel for Bree though, I know how bad sand in personal places can get...
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  • From FairySlayer on January 20, 2011
    That's a great use of the sand theme, and the idea of sand being stuck in the genitals is bad enough even without it being trapped inside and rubbing like mad. You made it clear that Bree wouldn't have asked for help if not for the torture. Then the stallion's excitement, and sneakiness, was perfect after she improvised so wonderfully. You did a great job with the imagery, pithy and clear.

    I like the mix of naiveté and arousal on her part. It seemed like a good mix because she was getting her first taste (pun intended) of experiences that are so primal yet she'd been forced to repress for so long. It was a bit of a release for her too, and the idea that she wants another "drink" afterwards was shockingly funny. "Certainly!"

    Let's hope they find some water so he doesn't get too dehydrated and that her mouth doesn't go dry. (Well, he'll make sure it doesn't I suppose.) Then imagine what will happen when she finally learns the truth about what she did.


    By the way, when I first saw the title I thought, for a fleeting moment, that the story was going to be about a horse and a rooster. Then I laughed and imagined that if that was the case then the rooster would probably be wielding a chainsaw.

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