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Reviews for When You're Not Looking

By : Embracer
  • From ANON - csweetiey on April 09, 2015
    NO it can't be over. I LOVED it So much. I like your style. Iove the switching between points of view. I could NOT PUT my phone down. I was very sad to see when I hit the last chapter and devastated when you had no other writing posted. I would have loved to read the next chapter!!

    Lots of love. And five stars!!
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  • From ANON - Guardgirlgab on November 18, 2014
    This story is just ahhhhh! I love it
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  • From ANON - ZacFan18 on September 23, 2012
    "My words spur him on and his thrusts become more powerful, rougher. I love it. He raises himself on his knees, and hooks my ankles over his shoulders. It’s so much deeper this way. Oh my god! Holy fuck! We’re both shouting expletives, and sounds that have no definition. It’s fast and hard and dumbfounding. Every plunge is more intense. We’re propelled together to the heavens and fall back to earth together falling into each other with languid ecstasy."

    That is a fabulous description! Insanely hot chapter--quite worth the wait (and the wait for them made sense). Your writing is wonderful!

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  • From Agravain on June 27, 2012
    Really good story - looking forward to more :)
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