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Reviews for An Unexpected Turn of Events

By : Kaori_Kisaragi
  • From ANON - on July 02, 2016
    Incredible, absolutely fantastic writing. The erotic scenes feel alive, the relationship natural and the quality of the writing is just top notch. I wish there was more.
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  • From ANON - Anon on September 18, 2015
    Oh comeon! Dont leave me hanging
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  • From ViktornovaMk2 on June 01, 2015
    I find this story very interesting and hope that it continues much farther. The thing is though, if this story takes place after the demon book, Artemis is a wizard, he has a bit of magic. Second, what happened to Butler's niece? Third, Artemis would have so may contingencies in place, Trouble's head would go the way of a Michel Bay movie.
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  • From ANON - CandraJade on September 24, 2013
    I love your story. I love the love and passion between Arty and Holly and some scenes are simply hilarious. I loved the twins in Arty's bedroom and the introduction to Arty's parents.

    Although I'm a big fan of your story, I have to point out some mistakes, because I'm an annoying smartass like Arty. ;)

    1. Beckett and Myles aren't identical twins, they look as different as they are - Myles has black hair and Beckett is blonde.

    2. The elves are only fertile every 20 years, not every ten years. Holly briefly mentions that in the first book.

    3. If Holly is a Major now she would have gotten two promotions within a few months. The next LEP rank after captain is Lieutenant.
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  • From ANON - Ryan on August 20, 2013
    Great new people! The story continues on FanFiction.net http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7832868/7/An-Unexpected-Turn-of-Events
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  • From ANON - RaphaelofTheDarkness on February 14, 2013
    hey just visiting to see how you were doing since the move from FF.net I am curious as to why you haven't finished the story transferring among other things
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  • From ANON - red on January 31, 2013
    Really liked it, narrative style is a lot like the books
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  • From ANON - AlanG on September 08, 2012
    Read the entire story in one sitting. Loved it. Do you plan to release more? From the tags and some not so subtle hints in earlier chapters, it looked like you had pregnancy plot elements planned. I'd be psyched to read any new chapters you put out.
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  • From WhiteWhiskey on August 13, 2012
    I can't read it like this. I suggest some formatting, as many are out off by the ol' Block o' Text
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