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Reviews for Pack Mother

By : fusedtwilight
  • From Eclectic_Pet on September 29, 2013
    Oh, I LOVED Leah's present from the pack!!!!!! I can so see Esme, Rose, and Alice convincing everyone to expand the house. But of course, Emmett had to come up with a 'wolf-cave'...that was awesome. I was afraid that Ulf's group was going to follow Jim and Leah on their honeymoon; I am so glad I was wrong. No, no, no...don't trust the other pack!!! Maybe Jacob, Leah, and Jim should visit the 'spirit' to find out more about the others? More, Please!!!
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  • From Eclectic_Pet on September 27, 2013
    Poor Jim. First the talk with a VERY scary Sue. Second the talk the pack. Then the fight with the alpha. Man, what a day! Only to be topped off with finally having Leah! He is a good guy and Leah deserves him. But of course the spirit has to mess with things.
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  • From Eclectic_Pet on September 24, 2013
    Oh, PRICELESS, the situation with Rachel and Leah!!!!!! I also, loved that having to explain to the 'parents' was awkward. Boy, Jim through a monkey-wrench into the works. I could see Jacob being upset (the married wolf), but I did not expect Quil. I don't think it is fair for him to be upset. He has an imprint; yes she is young, but he still has one. More, Please!!!!!
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  • From Eclectic_Pet on September 22, 2013
    I am enjoying this story immensely! You make sure that there is sex in every chapter *happy shiver*. I like that Rebecca is not mad at Seth. But she should not have left. The Black family is an important part of the La Push/Shape-Shifter community. I await to see what happens next. More, please!!!!
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  • From Eclectic_Pet on September 21, 2013
    I like that Seth will finally be able to continue the Clearwater line. But I hear eerie music in the background. Yes, Seth with get luck, but will his imprint? I suspect that the twin (who is already married, by the way) will be Seth's imprint. Just a gut feeling.
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  • From ANON - Anon on September 20, 2013
    I Love this story!!! I came across it and read it all in one day. I cant wait to see what happens next!!!
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  • From Eclectic_Pet on September 18, 2013
    After the talk with Mother Nature, I was so afraid that this story would be coming to an end *pouty face*. But then the compulsion reared its head again *happy face*. I have a sneaky suspicion that Leah still must mate with Jim (the young man who left town)!?!?!? Even if I'm not right, there will be more chapters *happy dance*!!!! Also, I listed this story under my profile in the 'Currently Reading' section. I just had to recommend it!!!
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  • From Eclectic_Pet on September 16, 2013
    Que the 'Twilight Zone (TV show) music'!!!! This is really spooky. What is mother nature going to have to say about this? Prodigal Son?!?!?!?! More, plot twists...I LOVE THEM!!!
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  • From Eclectic_Pet on September 10, 2013
    Oh my gosh. I cried through the entire chapter...TRULY! Emily is a very strong woman to be willing to send her husband and soul-mate to bring Leah back. Hopefully the other imprints will become stronger women too. They need to be, to face the future that the spirit has envisioned. OK, can I put away the tissues now?!?!?!?!?
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  • From Eclectic_Pet on September 10, 2013
    I just finished Chapter 8 and I had to post a review before I moved on to Chapter 9. Oh, the consequences for Leah, make me want to cry *sniff, sniff*. The poor girl is now responsible for not only the future generation of shape-shifters, she is now responsible for the hearts of her entire pack. That is a burden that only a VERY strong woman could handle. But Leah, needs to realize that she IS strong and that she CAN be what the tribe needs.
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  • From Eclectic_Pet on September 07, 2013
    That was an awesome chapter!!!! No sex, but i was on the edge of my set the whole time. Even during Leah's dream; I wanted to know how she was going to save herself!?!?!?! I can't wait for the next chapter with the 'boys' (lol). I guess the 'boys' will soon become 'men' at the hands of Leah. Oh, did the compulsion manage to reach out and ensnare Jim on his bus out of town *twilight zone music*? More, please!!!
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  • From Eclectic_Pet on September 06, 2013
    Oh, the plot and subplots just thicken! I like that the girls (imprints) are trying to help and at least one is willing to allow the compulsion. I think that Kim, might learn to be a stonger person because of it. And oh my, what a booty call with Quil AND Embry *I love the graphic description, keep it up*!?!?! More, please!!!!!!
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  • From Eclectic_Pet on September 04, 2013
    Oh, I knew Jim was a shape-shifter. It was Leah’s cramps that made me suspect. She had to react to another shape-shifter differently, since he was not part of the pack yet. I almost thought he was the one killing the people in the area.

    But you gave us another plot twist this that one. I did not see that one coming. Poppy as a real werewolf?!?!?!? What does she have planned for Leah? I suspect that she will try to trap Leah and have Leah become pregnant by the others (her own pack).

    I like that Seth’s friends and the pups are having their own issues with Leah and the compulsion. So many hormonal boys!!

    As always, more…please!!!

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  • From ANON - fanficlover88 on September 04, 2013
    I love this story! I really hope you continue it!! :)
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  • From Eclectic_Pet on September 02, 2013
    Oh, I love how Embry and Quil are willing to 'throw themselves on their swords' and offer their 'services' to help Leah and the pack!?!?!?!?! Really tough making those booty calls.

    And now the 'boys' want to help out(lol). Way to 'man up' guys!

    Now, why would Leah be affected by Jim (even if it is mild)? Could Jim be a shape-shifter too (maybe an unknown)?

    More, please!!!!
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