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Reviews for Solitude Souls

By : lostsoul6
  • From stray523 on February 06, 2009
    I liked the story, but you could use a beta.


    p.s. I used to be one of those blood-suckers on Decatur in '98. Don't suppose you hung out in the Crystal or the Hideout or Sin City did you?



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  • From Mikai on April 20, 2005
    That was pretty good, but the format isn't very pleasing to the eye..
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  • From ANON - Peleia on April 18, 2005
    I agree with I-kun that the technical problems make it hard to read, and really take away from the rest of the story... but it does have a lot of potential. I got a really good feel for your main character, and found him interesting. Keep writing! Technical stuff just takes practice.

    I also love seeing some P.B.Z work here. =) She was my first love when it came to M/M action... it was her books that got me interested in slash, in general.
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  • From ANON - I-kun on December 24, 2003
    Go for spell check, proper punctuation, and paragraph breaks before posting next time. Just the formatting hurts my eyes, not to mention the awkward phrasing and the choppy sentences. I couldn't even make it past the first few lines without thinking "What's a third-grader doing writing slash fiction." Keep working on it.
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