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Reviews for Peter Captured

By : lexyhamilton

From ANON - fan on November 17, 2008
I know you love this couple far too much to let it die, please return.
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From ANON - josiD on November 16, 2008
So I guess this means you're ending it here? How unfortunate, I really enjoyed this story. It's the first fanfic I've read where actual human emotions have been so masterfully ascribed to the characters without resorting to cliche or PWP standards. Here's hoping it is ever finished.
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From ANON - My_Own_Childhood_Hero on November 15, 2008
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From ANON - avidreader on November 14, 2008
Please, I need to know how this ends!
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From ANON - lolita... on November 14, 2008
i was recommended youre fanfiction by a friend with a history of exaggerating things; this time it appeared they could not be more apt in their generous praise. heres hoping you pick it up again, would love to read more.

lolita...
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From ANON - DEX on November 12, 2008
this is the best pan fic on this site and any other, it's a shame you've dropped the story. i wish you'd return...
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From ANON - Avidya on November 10, 2008
This is such a great story!!! i really love the way you write, it's very enterntaining. I also enjoyed all the psychology behind the characters. How very slowly Peter begins to develop Stalkhom syndrome, even if he denies his love for Hook it is still there. I'm guessing it's why instead of killing him when he had the chance he saves his life and tries to get him to some sort of shelter.
Overall it's a facinating story, you should finish it....but since it's been so long since you last posted, the chance of that happening is mostly very slim.
Anyways, thanks for writing this, and i really enjoyed it even if its not finished!
Keep writing
~A Fan of Pan

PS
I don't expect you to answer this, so don't worry about it
....sorry for all the spelling errors....
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From ANON - Anon on November 03, 2008
I've read this story so many times now! I can never get sick of it! It's some awesome work! Very disturbing and dark for sure, but still an awesome work. I had hoped it'd be updated, but you're probably busy. I know I got very busy once I started college, nothing but homework and exams for me. Yaaay. -_- Anyway, I just wanted to say I like your style and you've got some talent.
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From ANON - Ana on November 03, 2008
Man I love this story. I can't believe it hasn't been updated for two years. Guess it's officially dead? That's too bad. It was a pretty deep story.
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From ANON - Quin on November 03, 2008
I simply adore your writing techniques; never have I seen done what you have with these characters, and I applaud you all the more for it. I hope you return to this story.

Quin.
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From amskitty214 on October 20, 2008
Ho gosh...

I love you...

XD I'm in Peter Pan (the play) as the Croc, Nana, and a Lost Boy...so I felt the Croc's pain. Damn it. D: Whatever happened to the Lost Boys?

Oh man, this is the best Peter Pan fanfiction I've ever found. And...How I wish you'd write more...!

I also appreciate the lack of grammatical stupidity of your story. >:( It's so hard to find a decent writer these days!!
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From ANON - sway on October 09, 2008
do continue...i dont want to have to beg
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From ANON - kio on October 04, 2008
Please don't end it here! Continue it at once!
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From ANON - addison on October 04, 2008
You really must continue this story. Well-written, intriguing, in-character and simply stunning. I have to know how Peter and Hook end up.
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From ANON - Kiki on June 17, 2008
Aw I hope you continue this one day! I really want to see how Peter and Hook's relationship develop together now that Hook's at the mercy of Peter instead! I really do hope you continue this. I re-read all the chapters all the time. :(
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