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By : knossos191
  • From ANON - sap on November 24, 2006
    This is a great story. I love that sense of humor in your writing. You just need to edit/proofread. The last chapter looks like it belongs to another story, an Inuyasha fanfic. Mixed up? Lol.
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  • From ANON - Jackaniny on October 02, 2005
    What's with the sixth chapter?! I was looking forward to the rest of this!
    The story so-far is awesome with all the cool references to religion and the coming back from the dead and stuff.
    Please write more!
    Jackaniny
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  • From ANON - B€a§± B¤¥ on May 04, 2005
    Please hurry up and put in the right chapter! The rest was great.
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  • From ANON - BeastBoy on April 29, 2005
    There is something wrong, PLEASE! fix it. This is perfectly good, and then you change the story. WHY?
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  • From ANON - black on April 20, 2005
    Um. What the hell? A sexy scene with Tobias and Rachel and the next its Kagome and the mutt? Okay... Big ol' error right there homie.
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  • From ANON - Kim on February 01, 2005
    I don't know how long ago you wrote this, but I really hope you get back to it! I've been peddling it off to my friends mercilessly in the hour it took me to read it. I love the storyline; please finish it.

    And what's with the Inuyasha thing at the end?
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  • From ANON - mighty mouse on July 29, 2004
    haha thats great

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  • From ANON - black on June 01, 2004
    This story is pretty wild. I'm glad its not one of those fics where its sex, non stop. Its irritating reading stuff like that. Its like whats the point when there is porn??? Anyway..i thought the sex scene would have been more intimite but i knew right off it'd be like that cause ur style is on the wildside. A lot of cursing though..it fits in at certain places but its just making this story seem downright barbaric. REally good story, even though..i might even steal it ..revise it to be more sweeter and post it it fanfiction.net. ....just kidding ! if i do ill ask. im serious by the way.
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  • From on May 19, 2004
    Very good writing! You could do Marco falling for Jordan, since Jordan is very obviously n win with him, and Jordan should acquire something, too. She doesn't have many morphs, does she? Tobias would need some morphs, too.
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  • From ANON - punkrocker on February 08, 0000
    please do update really soon. This is some of the best stuff I have ever read.
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  • From ANON - Zlord on April 30, 2004
    not bad, make more, include jordan in there with someone, maybe even rachel...but, I mean it, it's a very good story, yopu nee3d to write more
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  • From ANON - fucker on April 21, 2004
    HAHA!!!!!!!!you are so dam funny y mean tobias and rachel got cought fucking each other that is one disturbing situation.
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  • From on March 08, 0000
    YES! Good job Draco. Though I don't think Seamus will listen to Draco's warning. What is Dumbledoor going to say about everything? Congrats on a great writting job. I'm looking forward to more.
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  • From ANON - abc on February 07, 2004
    how about marco/jordan
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  • From ANON - Anon on February 08, 0000
    Surely that's not the end??
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