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Reviews for Afterwards

By : ThePhantomSockPuppet
  • From ANON - ElizabethBathory83 on January 10, 2005
    I really like this story! I don't know the last time you updated, but I wish it continued! I agree with you...when I was a teenager, L.J. Smith was wonderful! What ever happened to her?
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  • From ANON - TnN on December 21, 2004
    I think this is really nice. I'd like longer chapters, of course, but it's still nice. I like the way you've described that they've all moved on. I'm looking forward to the Julian/Jenny parts as well, but I'd rather that you take your time. This is unfolding nicely... hooray for plot!
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  • From ANON - Laura on July 06, 2004
    So far, yve gve got a good start. I was hoping there would be more than just two chapters... get back to writing!
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  • From ANON - Rain on May 16, 2004
    You're kind of bouncing in this story. I'm not finding a point and it's already 2 chaps in. Please make there be something interesting in the 3rd chappy and make it longer than a paragraph. THe summary seemed great but after reading those two 'chapters' I'm bored.
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  • From ANON - Elwyn on April 28, 2004
    Please write more!! I see you haven't updated in a few months, i hope this hasn't been abandoned. The Vampire Diaries have always been my favorite.. but you have a good continuation going here. Can't wait to see Julian!!
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  • From ANON - kohaku on April 18, 2004
    It's nice to see a well written sequel to the forbidden game trilogy. The premise is interesting too, I'd really like to see more. Please keep writing!
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  • From ANON - Rosal on March 15, 2004
    Two LJS fanfics here, so of course I'm going to read them both. I like it so far. If you like LJS fanfiction check out TTales if you havent allready. www.ttales.net I think. Or you can just do a search for twilight tales. This reminds me a little of every other FG fic out there, but there really are only two ways you can go with the story line. Bring Julian back or leave him dead. Which one will you be trying? I like the twist you give it, phycologicaly. Sorry, cant spell. And I love the thought of Dee in Nigeria. I want to see more!!!
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  • From ANON - Alexandria on February 27, 2004
    I enjoyed your fanfic. It was really well writen. When will you write more? I'd like to see where this story is going. I liked the relationships between the characters and the forshadowing. I hope that we see more of Julian...
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  • From ANON - loki on February 15, 2004
    i like this very much. a little on the short side, but the writing is very good. please update soon! i wanna see how Julian comes into the story! ^_^
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  • From ANON - sita on February 13, 2004
    Hey, you should keep writing this, I was so happy to see a Forbidden Game fanfiction. Don't stop, please!
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  • From ANON - Anon on February 11, 2004
    I know what you mean about L.J. I loved the Forbidden Game trilogy, and many other of her titles as a teenager. She is a truly gifted author. I'm finding your fic very interesting so far and hope that you continue. Although the chapters were short, they were very intriguing and your writing flows beautifully. It was sad to see that the whole gang wasn't together anymore but separation is a fact of life. Great job. Please coue! ue!
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