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By : AriannaHawk
  • From Lheage8256 on June 11, 2007
    What a very cute story. And, even though I've never routed for Edward and Anita, and the time this story is placed, I could see a relationship developing between the two. Seems to move a bit to fast at times, but I understand the need to get it out. Also, I am anxious to see what will happen when Richard and Jean-Claude catch up with Edward and Anita. Keep up the good work, and do not let your readers wait to long.
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  • From ANON - LadySkye on December 01, 2006
    I just finished reading your story and think that it is very good. I can't wait untill the next chapter comes out keep up the good work.
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  • From ANON - Callista Wolfwood on October 03, 2006
    Wow Death a virgin so hard to comperhend... *shrugs* anyways I love your story so far and I can't wait for the next chapter.
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  • From ANON - angel on October 11, 2005
    that was great please more more i would love to read more please update soooooooooooooooooooooon in till then later

    angel


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  • From ANON - Jo on June 07, 2005
    This chappy was good, I was going to read this story before, but I just couldn't get on the internet. It was good! The characters are almost like in the books, that's a compliment, since I really think that no one other than Lauren can really make Anita come to life. But I really did hate the soft Edward. I mean, he's Death, no mushy. Well, I guess everybody has their own ideas and tates. But I sooo truly agree with you on Richard. He's just so stupid, making everybody feel bad because of the way he acts. So imature and stupid. If he doesn't like what he is, he can just deal with it himself or go to therapy. He doesn't have to go around making Anita feel like shit. By the way, Nathaniel is not that of a wimp! He's mature and stuff in Narcissus in Chains and then in Cerulean Sins and then in Incubus Dreams he's just so fucking good. Literally, Anita can vouch to that. So, I just wanted to say your story is good, cool, and get your but of the couch and start writing! I love it.
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  • From ANON - Anon on April 27, 2005
    I've never before cared for the idea of Edward and Anita as a couple. However, you did such a great job and gave them the type of relationship I could imagine them having. And you did it with such detail. They were friends first and foremost. Thanks


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  • From ANON - Elizabeth Spiegel on April 24, 2005
    WHEN ARE YOU GONNA UPDATE!!!! i'M TRYING TO BE PATIENT, BUT I'M NOT A PATIENT PERSON...SO I WILL SIMPLY HAVE TO LOWER MYSELF TO BEGGING, O.K. OH....
    PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE
    PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE
    UPDATE SOON!
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  • From on March 24, 2005
    Hello! I just wanted to say that I have read all of your chapters so far and I think that are amazing! I really like how you didn't jump into them getting their nooky on. It was great how you worked your way up to that point. What really stuck out to me was how little things Anita and Edward did together kinda chipped away at Edward until he did open up and it wasn't full of mystery. He seemed to be like a normal person, not just death. I think you've done a great job so far and I can't wait to read the next chapter. You play all of the characters so well...wonderful! Keep creating ~_*!
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  • From ANON - Cata on January 03, 2005
    I really enjoyed this story, even though I have not read any of the books that possibly go with this SL of yours. But it was interesting and I hope you add more soon.

    -cata
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  • From ANON - Elizabeth Speigel on October 15, 2004
    When are you going to update? I wanna know what happens when the others find out about Edward and Anita.......... PLeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeaaaaaaaassssssssseeeeeeeeeee update soon.
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  • From ANON - leslie on September 05, 2004
    More... please, please please! I love Edward's character and ever since Obsidian Butterfly, I've been dying to have them together. So... love the story, please, writee!!!e!!!

    THanks!
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  • From ANON - Sam-e on July 02, 2004
    come on!!! i cant wait any longer...lol update!! what happens with edward?!? i always loved edward, and always hoped Anita and him would so something!! ahh...i need a new chp!! plz update!!! im begging you!!
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  • From ANON - Es on June 12, 2004
    OMG! J-C and R are soooo not gonna be happy! Update soon? I can't wait to see what St. Ignace is like!?!?!
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  • From ANON - I on May 18, 2004
    yes! an edward and anita fic!!!! although his being a virgin seems highly improbable - enjoying to read. more more more!
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  • From ANON - Claire on May 07, 2004
    Very interesting take on the Edward/Anita relationship, though I would have to say that it's *extremely* out-of-character, especially for Edward. I mean, Death suddenly going off with Anita on a road-trip, and just leaving all his bounty-hunting behind? Don't *think* so... But anyway, it was kinda cool to read, and I'd like to see how the story's gonna end! So keep up the hard work...
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