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Reviews for Awakenings

By : KimberlyA
  • From ANON - Anon on May 07, 2004
    this ending is so much better than the movies, bravo *gives a pat on the back*
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  • From ANON - Piper on May 07, 2004
    Hey i just wanted to say that your story was so well done! and was not overly gross or repulsive. i hope you keep writing and do another one. very well done!
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  • From ANON - Ice Cat on May 06, 2004
    Well, I have got to hand it to you, you write a very good story. It took me a night and day to read it since I orginally started to read it a few hours before having to go into work and came right back to it once I got home from work. The y way was way more important to finish reading then heading right to bed after a long night of work. Your portrayal of Peter and Wendy was excellant, and the story itself was absolutely great! I hope to reare sre stuff from you concerning these two. I just watched the movie for the first time (I originally bought the DVD for my son and ended up watching it myself) and decided after the movie was over with to see what sort of stories were out there about those two. Your story was an excellant surprise...I just can't seem to say enough how good it is!

    Ice Cat
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  • From ANON - Nee on May 06, 2004
    Just reread it today and have to say I loved the sweet part where Wendy talks about virginity and Peter hopes she will go first so he can copy her. That is exactly like Peter Pan. You have stayed so absolutely true to the characters it's like you're channeling Barrie! :) Bravo, well done. I had to read those lines three times because I just loved the way you wrote it. So cute, so *Peter* to think such a thing, to ask why he'd want a virginity if he already has one. LOL Comedic yet not at the same time.
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  • From ANON - Mercy on May 04, 2004
    Great story! I love the way you write the characters, they're both realistic and true to the character. I haven't finished the story yet, but I hope it has a happy ending. I've always thought that Peter and Wendy should be together. Hopeless romantic, but especially in the movie... Anyways, great fic!
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  • From ANON - waffles on May 03, 2004
    Hey, im really liking this story! im not sureyou you meant to, but I loved the way that you used the traditional voice of the Peter Pan story. Great job.
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  • From ANON - Nariearie the Snake on May 02, 2004
    Absolutly beautiful! So you can imagine my frustration when AFF net suddenly went down for some reason at the 8th chapter. I actually had been avoiding the Peter Pan section since the 3 stories that were here were all ped/rape. Never saw the movie, this has always been a book to me. lovely job.
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  • From ANON - Scrawl on May 01, 2004
    awwww! I love it!
    I've only read the first three chapters...so far. I feel a little weird about it-it's Peter Pan and Wendy, man-but hey, I like it anyway. Maybe I should just imagine Jeremy Sumpter and Raquel watsername instead :D
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  • From ANON - Lorelei on April 30, 2004
    I loved it you remind me of someone who writes in the sailor moon section you see you both are so good at describing things i think you captured the essence of peter pan perfectly in stead of turning them into porn stars you had them act out the fanfic the way the characters would have done it. I look forward to reading future fics from you
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  • From ANON - Crystalline Temptress on April 30, 2004
    You're a superb writer--which is no surprise, as you're professional. :) This is an excellent, excellent fic, and I'm glad that there are writers like you in the fanfiction world. Your character and plot development, the concepts, and your fantastic and apt writing style put together this wonderful piece. Well done! :)
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  • From ANON - hilary on April 29, 2004
    yay! i know i havent reviewed, cos, well, i've never reviewed on this site before. but the ending to that was absolutely perfect. about the children/adult thing... awwww. to be totally honest, it made me cry. and im not one who cries easily. it was just so perfect. i read this story in one day, and i loved it all. very very well writtall all the descriptive words, no typos, nothing out fo context or that doesnt fit. it all flowed just beautifully. congratulations. story very well written.
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  • From ANON - mintmocha on April 27, 2004
    Remarkable! “Awakenings” is well-written, just the right mix of drama and smueeheeehee). And I especially love Peter…the way you write him, I mean. The way you described his innocence, and his struggle to come to terms with his sexuality…well gee…it’s pretty damn HOT!

    And I adoow yow you paint a vivid scene with your words. This line here: “The grass was tall around them, neaas tas tall as Wendy's shoulder, and sown liberally with creeping wild roses that permeated the salty air with their own musky sweet scent.”… I just love that. I could practically imagine the scent of the air Peter and Wendy were inhaling at that particular moment!

    I love that this fic wasn’t purely smut, the sex became so magical and beautiful because you had Peter and Wendy holding out (and us readers waiting) for so long. (*grin*) Of course since I’m shamelessly a fanthe the PWP, the fic could have been complete smut and I would still love it just cause you’re so good! (*coughmoresmutcough*)

    Reading your fic was so enjoyable, it brought me to this really introspective yet giddy state that I felt when I first read “Memoirs of a Geisha” by Arthur Golden. ^_guesguess that’s my way of saying I admire you, and I hope you write more Peter/Wendy fics. Sorry for the epic review. ^_^

    Email me! :)
    mintmocha
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  • From ANON - Nee on April 25, 2004
    Just wanted to say hello and I'm sorry I have not written you yet - just wanted to say also that I agree with what others have said about a sequel. Of course, I know how long it takes to write these, so I understand if you'ro buo busy. I will get you that review, Ijust need to go through the story again to pick out my favorite bits. If you have an updates list, please add me.
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  • From ANON - ramona grimalkit on April 25, 2004
    I love this fic so much! If I asked you to do a sequel, would you? I think I'd just melt if I got to read about Wendy explaining pregnancy! *laughs with tears in eyes*. Seriously, though, this is a really great fic, and it puts a lot of others to shame. Sorry you don't have a lo rev reviews, but you deserve a million. A Peter Pan fic was never done so well, and thank you for convincing me it could be done.
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  • From ANON - Mackenzie on April 24, 2004
    This is an adorable story! I thoroughly enjoyed it and hope that you'll continue to write.
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