Click Here!

Reviews for Awakenings

By : KimberlyA
  • From ANON - Lindsey on April 22, 2004
    Fantastically written! I was a little wary of reading a Peter Pan story, because I worried that the author wouldn't keep with the innocentness portrayed in the movie. But I found myself to be pleasantly surprised with 'Awakenings'. The Peter of your story was every bit the Peter of the movie. ('Cept that Diswoulwould never put the things Peter and Wendy did in one of their movies. lol)

    Loved it!

    -Lindsey
    Report Review

  • From ANON - Anon on April 20, 2004
    It's REALLY late here, almost 2 AM and I've just finished this story. This deserves a very throough review, so I'm going to email it to you tomorrow. I will say that this was absolutely beautifully written, masterful and true to the book. I want to point out all the best parts because I found myself reacting to so many things and one minute I'd be smiling or have a giggle at Peter or nod silently in agreement with Wendy. As you may have noticed, the Peter Pan sections of most fan fic sites are really heavy with slash, so I was ecstatic to find this gem. Imagine my happiness at seeing it was not just a one shot but a whole 11 chapters! I do hope you will consider a sequel with lots more lovely smut. I will write more tomorrow, please put me on your updates list if you have one. I have a story on AFF about the Secret Garden and I'm also in my early 30's and a pro writer/editor so I think we may have more stuff in common. Do you have a live journal by any chance? I'm SO glad to "meet" you and I really loved this story. Now pardon me while i go grab my boyfriend ;P Mena
    Report Review

  • From ANON - Inari on April 18, 2004
    Ah, what can I say, except...I liked your story and your writing style very much.
    Report Review

  • From ANON - Bonnie on April 17, 2004
    OH MY GOD!I've just seen the film "Peter Pan" and I went totally nuts!It was the best animated movie I've evre seen!The actors played their charachters beautifully, especially Jeremy who was sooo cute!Ahhh
    I don't know if you noticed but all through the film he sent Wendy these looks that were very...knowing.As if he knew everything and as if he was the pro!But all the same there was a deep admiration and possibly love in that look, as well.I think that you have described that look in this fic in an amazing way!It was very romantic and it just totally blew me away.You know that there are some fics, in which they describe only animal sex,but here it was perfectly told.It didn't disgust me at all! You managed to say every detail with lots of feeling and less sexual action,which I really admire in an author. Also,the embarassing moments where Peter didn't know what do to were soo logical! I mean, from where could he know what sex was? But you wrote that superbly as well. It wasn't awkward, but cute!
    All in all, I praise your wonderful writing and I can't even begin to understand why there isn't as much as reviews as you deserve!* glares menacingly at all who didn't leave a review* I know how off-putting that is, but I'm very glad that you continued,nonetheless. You go girl!!!
    Report Review

  • From ANON - Bonnie on April 17, 2004
    OH
    Report Review

  • From ANON - Allison on April 11, 2004
    Aww crap, that was really cute and sweet. There really isn't much Wendy/Peter stuff of any sort of substance or quality around I reI really liked this. Good job.
    Report Review

  • From ANON - Conni on April 10, 2004
    wow...just...wow.
    this story was fantastic.
    absolutly wonderful.

    dunno what else to say....i loved it.

    ^_^
    Report Review

  • From on April 10, 2004
    Hey!
    I've read the WHOLE story and I think it's BRILIANT! Can you ano another new story like it? I loved it how the romance went slow and nothing was rushed 'cause that's how it would have been in the book/movie! Did you know that they might be making a sequel? I can't wait! Bloody fantasic work Kim and I can't wait to read more! Shame on you other people for not replying! How do I add you to my favourites? Can't find the damn button! Cya!
    ~ Lauren!
    Report Review

  • From ANON - sam on April 06, 2004
    It is good, but I am the type who would like more SEX and ACTION. Keep on writing I like you stories.
    Report Review

  • From ANON - Tiger5913 on April 02, 2004
    Lovely, simply lovely... I adore this... A multi-chapter Wendy x Peter story with a plot, lemon, the protagonists in-character, what more could I ask for? I can't wait to see them satisfy each other's desires...
    Report Review

  • From ANON - anna on April 01, 2004
    i just had to review this story! thanks so much for this tale of young love and magic... very tastefully written, good style, with just the right amount of playfulness and naiveté. oh, and i also appreciate your "realistic" approach to the love scenes, because story-book smut is all very well, but perfection gets boring after a certain time. and who says something closer to the real thing can´t be erotic as well? in my book, it´s even an improvement. so, once again, thank you!
    Report Review

  • From ANON - WendyPan on March 25, 2004
    THANK YOU! Finally someone has written a story about Peter and Wendy! (As you can tell from my name, I am a fan of that relationship!) I must commend you as the story was written absolutley wonderfully! You now tie as my favorite author here on AFF! (Along with Sluggie, who writes Buffy the Vampire Slayer fics .. :D) THANK YOU SO MUCH! You did a fabulous job!

    A sequel perhaps?
    Report Review

  • From ANON - Jade the Goddess on March 22, 2004
    Ahoy,

    I read this story the other day at some appalling hour of the mornng and the net clocked out on me. So I came back later and finished it off. And have not been able to get it out of my head since.

    You capture Barrie's style astonishingly well. I reread the novel cause i was all 'Awww..." and it was as if while reading Awakenings, I was reading a continuation of Peter and Wendy's story (Jane and Margaret be damned). Though I would never admit it, the odd romantic thought does cross my mind and that is what Awakenings is. Romantic.

    Another thing that struck me was their naivety. It reminded me of a few times when I was younger. It just brought a smile to my face, remembering all that playful exploring.

    This is a great read, well written and best of all, a happy ending for the young pair. Probably the best story in this section so far.

    Best of luck with the rest of your writing!

    Jade
    Report Review

  • From ANON - Anya on March 20, 2004
    YAY! I loved this fic. It took just the right amount of romance, smuttiness(of course) and naitivity to make it great. Wonderful job
    Report Review

  • From ANON - Debra on March 20, 2004
    I greatly enjoyed your story. I must say that your story is written in the same manner that the Petter Pan book was written in. You captured Peter Pan in the exact same light at the auther of the book did. The story was extremly well written. I'm going to be frank and thatthat i was much more than just a the other regular porn stories that I've run into so often. Although I sat for more than three hours to read this story, and its nearly four in the morning (I regarded the fact that I have to go to work later today), I enjoyed the story very, very well. I have been wanting to read a story like this that contained the characters of the movie and I am very glad that you wrote one. I hope you keep writing in the future, you are a very talented writer.
    Report Review

T.O.S. | Content Guidelines | DMCA Info | F.A.Q. | Facebook | Tumblr | Abuse | Support | Contact | Donate

Click Here!