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Reviews for Awakenings

By : KimberlyA
  • From ANON - DarkMystic on March 07, 2005
    Loved your story so much, It was very well written, and very well planned. Loved the love scenes, and the gradual understanding that peter obtained through investigating, had me excited to know what would happen next through reading it all. Hope you write more like this one because I wouldnt mind reading them, you're a great writer, thank you.
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  • From ANON - Zarah on March 03, 2005
    That was the most beautiful story that I have ever read!!!
    Peter Pan is one of my favorite movies..I just wished that they would have made the movie like that (or maybe the sequel?)
    Love Jeremy Sumpter!!! So I gotta love the story..
    Might there be a sequel where they might have kids?
    Lil Peter Pan? LoL
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  • From ANON - Dragon on March 01, 2005
    That was a sweet story i loved it, you kept the sweetness of peter pan while adding the adult themes, good job!!!
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  • From ANON - Drach on March 01, 2005
    Fantastic story, nicely written, good plot and excellent characterisation

    You could do with having a beta looking over it before you post as there are some rather odd spelling mistakes, but overall I thought this was great.
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  • From ANON - Aikosort on February 20, 2005
    Well. This is without a doubt the best story I've ever read on this site. I'd tell you why, but... well, you restated time and time again that you were going for realism, so I don't need to point it out to you. Suffice to say that this is damn good, and I would heartily recommend it to anybody.
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  • From ANON - me on February 18, 2005
    I think that this is the most perfect fan fiction I have ever read. It actually manages to capture the characters as they would be after the story and take them farther than any mainstream publication could.
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  • From ANON - J on February 07, 2005
    WOW! I loved it!
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  • From Shaznay on January 17, 2005
    I wish it didn't end. That story was so sweet. I liked how you took the characters of Peter Pan and actually used some of their characteristics in your story. (like Peter being ignorant to things because he was not exposed to it; the sex and what a husband was) Some people just use the names and the characters are nothing like that. Write another.
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  • From ANON - Monkey-Boy Thief on January 17, 2005
    Nice! Good characters, nice story, and lots of smut. Seriously, though, you portrayed the coming-of-age very well for the both of them. Keep up the writing.
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  • From ANON - janis on January 06, 2005
    Well. That was a good read. Really. So, any plans on writing a sequel? Hehe. Anyway, I just want to say that this is the first story I read here in AdultFF.net. Actually, I was really looking for a Wendy/Peter fic so that's it. Hey, there's a couple of typos in your story... but your story's good. Hehe.. love the smuttiness.. it's the first time i read an R-rated Peter Pan fic.. and it was a fun read. Really. I'd be glad to read more of your stories...
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  • From ANON - Chiruken on January 02, 2005
    Very interesting story...and quite plausible considering that Peter Pan really would have no way of knowing the basics that we take for granted concerning such things...after all, we are educated about sex at quite early ages now...and through media and such we become educated in sexuality. He would have no way of learning such things in Neverland, ne?

    ^_^x

    Chiruken
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  • From ANON - RAPluvsDBZ on January 02, 2005
    That was an amazing story. I had only just seen the Peter Pan movie for the first time recently and decided to see if there was any good fanfiction out there. Yours has definately impressed me. Good work, and keep it up.
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  • From ANON - Kim on January 01, 2005
    Great story. I like how you tried to describe emotions and reactions in such a realistic and innocent way. This is a rare talent, and it made the story a pleasure to read. Thanks, and keep up the great work (eg. by writting more wonderful stories).
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  • From ANON - Anon on January 01, 2005
    this was the best show, the peter pan flick, and i like this ending so much better :)
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  • From ANON - Ferret Girl on December 29, 2004
    I first read this along time ago and didn't post a review and I'm sad I didn't. This story has haunted me for so long now that I took the time and found it again. I feel you really captured the spirit of the movie and add the ending I always wanted. Thank you.
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