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Reviews for Awakenings

By : KimberlyA
  • From ANON - CamFan4Ever on December 21, 2004
    Great fic! Loved it!
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  • From ANON - pensfan100 on December 12, 2004
    Absolutely beautiful! I checked Peter Pan once before and was turned off by all the M/M stories so I was pleasantly surprised to see this one. You handled their innocence and love for one another so well! The characters matched the movie ones perfectly. I loved how he was still shying away from the word 'love' but at the end he finds the courage to say it. It was sweet and wonderful and very satisfying since I keep wanting to kick Wendy for leaving and Peter for not going. When I saw the movie my daughter and I both cried and cried. I guess she's growing up to be as hopeless a romantic as I am. Thanks for giving this story a wonderful closure!
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  • From on December 10, 2004
    This was so wonderfully sweet and romantic. Thank you for keeping the innocent, passionate tone of the book and the movie. I'm a sucker for happy endings, despite my love of ocassional angst...and I was smiling and sighing through the whole thing, feeling like I was deeply in love myself. It was so exciting, too, and so funny! I love the description of Peter's ignorant recital of what it means to be a "husband." That was just priceless...and the conversations about virginity...I found myself wishing that there was an easier attitude toward such things in our own world. (Because some repressive thoughts in that score linger still, eh?)
    Wonderful job. I'm glad I stumbled across it. Feel weepy and a little sad, but good, too.
    Much Love,
    Madame
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  • From SerenaSparkle on November 23, 2004
    !!!!!!!!!!!!Wow!!!!!!!!!!! what can i say but... I LOVED IT!!! =D I never thought about Wendy staying with Peter...
    That was (is?) a really creative idea...
    And explaining the change of Peter to boy to... young man...
    the only thing about it that kinda made it not as good as a "5" vote is the grammar and stuff but other than that it was great!

    You're a great writer! Lots and Lots of talent...
    Great Job! =)

    *Silent Writer*

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  • From ANON - silvercat on November 12, 2004
    I love it I love it I love it I love it I love it I love it I do I do I do!

    ~*~I do believe in faries, I do, I do~*~
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  • From ANON - NyxElfheart on November 09, 2004
    Brilliant! You wanted to stay to to the characters, and you did. I love how you blended a sweet epilogue with romance - and good smut! Thank you for such a wonderful story.
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  • From ANON - frogstompinfun on October 12, 2004
    MY GOD!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    and by jolly gove you have a talent, you have en unequivical god honest talent harbour it and I hope to read more !!!


    Phantom

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  • From ANON - Eye of Aurora on September 20, 2004
    OH MY GOD. I was afraid that I was the only one who got ridiculously turnn fon for the duration of this movie. I am definitely a major closet pedaphile. The sexual tensionin the movie was amazing, which you captured beautifully. It made me so happy that someone who can write so well saw the beauty and angst and hotness of Peter/Wendy (and I am almost totally for M/M unless the pairing is super taboo) but I love this couple. The movie was fricken porn for me, so this was extremely, wonderfully pleasing. Very well done. Keep it up. If you like Troy,R, PR, Pirates or Harry Potter, those are gloriously hot books for which to write fanfiction, and I'd totally seek you out to read any more than you've written. Awesome job. You made my week!!
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  • From ANON - anechan on September 11, 2004
    your writing is ame! me! excellent imagery and threshing out the characters' thoughts and feelings. very tastefully done. it's really sweet. this is the first time i've read a peter pan fic and i was not disappointed
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  • From ANON - sammy on August 30, 2004
    i thought all of your descriptions were wongerful and i felt as if i was wendy and that all happened to me. all i can say is, great job and keep them coming!
    (p.s. you're really goood at male/ female scenes)
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  • From ANON - fury on August 28, 2004
    *claps hands loudly* oh most excellent
    wonderful wonderful juts like i imagined it would be but never had the determination to write
    fantasic
    you give me much o dream about for nights to come thank you

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  • From ANON - Nessie-chan on August 27, 2004
    That. Was one. Of the BEST fics I have ever read! So... fairytale-like, innocent, sweet and completely romantic! I adored it! A story like this is a rare find. I could imagine everything perfectly and best of all, it wasn't just sex, it was making love. First times. And I loved it. Well done to you!
    N.B: I wonder if they'd ruin this if they made it into a film?!?!
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  • From ANON - kat on August 20, 2004
    it was an excellent story and it acuratly described the changes from child hood to adult hood. please wite more and dont spare any detail. it was the best!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Becki on August 04, 2004
    Wow, that was just so wonderful. I was so happy when the new live action Peter Pan came out and even mor excited when i learned that it showed the romantic relationship between Wendy and Peter that i had always felt should be there. This story only makes me even happier. There is a proper discovery stage, courtship and then passion. Thank you so much for finally writting the true and just story of Peter Pan. Thanks again, so very very much!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - PixieDust on August 03, 2004
    Wow! What a great story!kindkinda stumbled upon this (I've r evr even read a Peter Pan fic before) and I love it! You are truly a gifted author. I like how you kept Peter & Wendy (and even Mrs.Darling!) in character. Wendy was still ignorant but knowing at the same time, very much a girl becoming a woman. Peter was cocky and arrogant, yet unsure and, ex, exactly the way I would imagine a boy/young man who was completely ignorant of the world would be. And you wrote the steamy scenes well to! I love that you avoided all the irritating cliches - sweet "bodily fluids" (I wish!), climaxing at the same time, instinctivily knowing how to give the other pleasure. It was very true to what young people just discovering sex and sexuality encounter. Again, very well done! I can't wait to read more from you! Keep up the good work!
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