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Reviews for Awakenings

By : KimberlyA
  • From ANON - thedolphinqueen on July 31, 2004
    Wow. I can't find a better word to express what I think of your story. It was true to the characters, no bull-shitting cliched scenes, great dialogue. Wow.
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  • From ANON - LadyOrion on July 30, 2004
    Oh wow I love this. Your protrail of how unlearned they two of them are is so magnificently writen. I love the way Peter has no clue, and Wendy only a sligt glimer.
    It is such a relife to read a story that give a situation that alows the chareters to truly experiance the reality of the dawn of their sexuality.
    I only thing I wanted was a bit more of what the fiaries and mermaids spoke about but the story is not lacking becuse of it, so never worry about my sicuricuriosity.
    You have a great gift at weaving a tale never doubt that.
    'Orion
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  • From ANON - amyfushigiyugi on July 30, 2004
    WoW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! =^.^=
    I do beleave that is bestbest thing i have read in a very long time!!!!!!!!!!!
    I sent u a email so look for it. Grade A+++++ fanfiction
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  • From ANON - Sutashii on July 29, 2004
    That was absolutely amazing!! Unbelieveable! I loved every second of it, and you had me squealing and freaking out the whole time This has got to be one of the best PP fics Ive ever read!! Great job!
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  • From ANON - Anonymous on July 29, 2004
    Wow. I have to say that the ending brought tears to my eyes. This is most definitely the best story on this entire site. It was beautiful. I read it all in one sitting, it was just goo good. I've been looking for this exact kind of storyline for years, and you were the only person who could pull it off. It has every emotion I've always wanted to read in it. I'll always remember this as one of my absolutvorivorite fanfics. THANK YOU so much. And please, continue in your writing, because you are a fabulous author.
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  • From ErieDragon on July 29, 2004
    Well, uh... I never review anything.

    But, for some crazy reason, he am. am. Probably because your writing is absolutely amazing. Every moment it was so real, and so... wonderful. If writing can make you feel loved, then this is it. A standing ovation for spectacular characterization, beautiful descriptions and a true peek into innocence.

    Good job. I am enlightened--and very happy.
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  • From ANON - Carita on July 24, 2004
    I really loved your story! I recently just saw Peter Pan and decided to visit the site to see if anyone had any stories and I think you did a great job. I don't like reading smutty stuff, but the kind where the characters actually fall in love and move slowly. "Awakening" was a great story and I totally loved it!
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  • From ANON - Timebound on July 22, 2004
    Hmm...honestly, I didn't think I'd lthisthis fic when I first started reading it, but I quickly changed my mind. Somehow, you kept them both in character, and even though it deals with adult issues, there are certain parts which makes you see that they are still childlike (in their minds, of course). Peter's ignorance at certain things almost made me want to go 'awwww!' at certain places in the story. Anyway, since you said yove rve reviews (and I completely understand that) I thought I'd drop one for you. Great job!
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  • From ANON - Songbird21 on July 20, 2004
    AWWWWWWWWWWWW!!!! That was one of the sweetest fics I have ever read. You must wrtie more! Please email me if you do. I would love you you to continue this story. :)
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  • From ANON - Songbird21 on July 20, 2004
    Very good so far. I'm loving the whole "first time" stuff. Romance with smut is always the best. :)
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  • From ANON - Gabrielle on July 19, 2004
    Oh, what a lovely story! I had read your Secret Garden story and then forgotten about this one, until suddenly I was reading something about Peter Pan and returned to your author's page to read your story. It was romantic, and sweet, and erotic, and perfect. Thank you.
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  • From ANON - maeve on July 17, 2004
    the story was fantastic! i really enjoyed reading and i hope to read some of your other work soon
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  • From ANON - SorasAma on July 14, 2004
    Hello!. ^^ Your story was the best I've ever read. Other people just can't write them good.They write horribly and childishly. You have this.. special touch. I dunno what you did, but your fic is more than a 10-out-of-10. If I could, id give it a 100!! I loved your fic!!!! ^_____________________^ Keep it up!
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  • From ANON - tari on July 11, 2004
    Thank you very much for making such a wonderful story of Peter and Wendy. It was simply beautiful.
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  • From ANON - Dragonsmistress on July 10, 2004
    Hey! I don't know if you're still taking reviews for this fic, but I just wanted to tell you I absolutely adored it. You mentioned in the beginning that you wanted to keep the innocence to it while still exploring the more smutty side and I think you did a perfect job of that. I'd be interested to see more of your work. Your style is elegant, I'd be hard pressed to find any errors gramatically or cannonly (assuming there even are any because I didn't see a one), and the whole fic just pulled me in right from the beginning. Your characterization was perfect and the tone was just sweet and amazing, I liked that you were able to keep the same tone throughout fic.fic. So many authors change tones as they change moods. You didn't. It was absolutely a most beautiful fic. Thanks for the great read!
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