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Reviews for Awakenings

By : KimberlyA
  • From ANON - Rebecca on July 09, 2004
    wow, that was such an enjoyable story! So intelligently and beautifully written...unlike most of the fan fiction I've read, I can actually believe that this might have happened after the events of the movie/book. I just watched the film for the first time tonight and immediately had to jump on the internet to see if anyone had written any decent fan fiction on it. Thank you so much for this stReb
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  • From ANON - Brad on July 02, 2004
    I LOVE this story. Please add more. PLEEAASSEE!! It is awesome and realisatic (Peter Pan wise)
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  • From ANON - Anna K. on June 30, 2004

    I can´t think of any other way to describe this story but beautiful. I loved the way you used Peter's innocence and the little knowledge Wendy had show how 2 young beings discovered their own sexuality and the joy in it ;)
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  • From ANON - red_rapshody on June 30, 2004
    well, you've had over 3000 hits, a five-star rating, and several reviwes, i'm sure, compared to the chapter 7 numbers =) Peter Pan is one of my most favorite movies, and i found this story a complete *joy* to read. you know how to write, you can do plot with smut (and even romance!), and your characterazation is amazing. i don't think anyone else could have captured Peter and Wendy like you did. i hope you keep up the marvelous work! you are truly and inspiration.
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  • From ANON - Jacqueline on June 29, 2004
    That was the most beautiful story. I have never read anything like it and I must say I don't think I ever will again, unless, of course, it is in a fairy tale. I cried and laughed and blushed along with the characters. You have an amazing talent. I don't think I could ever do this tory justice if I were to explain its wonderfulness to my friends. The innocence and curiosity you had both Wendy and Peter Pan keep made this story that much more believable and beautiful. I hope you continue to write other stories and share your gift.
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  • From ANON - Dela on June 28, 2004
    Damn girl, that is one freakin' awesome story. I have read a lot of fan fiction in my day but few compare to that caliber of writing. Keep writing fan fiction girly, because you have a gift for it. Your story was smutty, yet very well written and realistic (a rare combination to find here) and I thorougly enjoyed reading it. Your descriptions of their hair color, people, and the environment of each scene was magnificant. As a writer myself, I am very picky with with the stories I read and don't read, and yours was unbelievable. Keep up the good work girl and I hope to read some more stories of yours some time soon. If you write anymore, email them to me okay? If you want, whenever I write some fan fiction, I can send it to you, if you are interested in reading it. Mutual admiration society- j/k! Talk to you later chica. Excellent jKeepKeep up the excellent writing.

    -Dela
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  • From ANON - StarMajesty on June 19, 2004
    That was a bautifully written fic; I'm so amazed! While I loved the move, I was higly unsatisfied with the ending. (Albeit not as unsatisfied as when I read the book...) I have been scouring ff.net and it has been overall... disappointing. Now that I've read this, I will continue to search ff.net with renewed vigor!
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  • From ANON - eide on June 13, 2004
    yay! well done, it's rather like a fairytale with smut for grownups. grin.
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  • From ANON - Alicia on June 10, 2004
    AMAZING. this is by far one of my favorite fics. you are one hell of a writer, you know that? you've got quite a talent and i admire you for it. :) keep it up.


    xo;Alicia
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  • From ANON - Nixie on June 10, 2004
    "Wasn't it terribly inconvenient? Did things get lost in there?" I've got tears in my eyes over that one. Your story thus far (chapter 8, I couldn't wait until the end to review) has been the most entertaining, most well-written, and sweetest fic I have come across in this particular fandom. It's hao fio find Peter/Wendy at all. Quite original too, and the writing style is perfectly in line with the storyteller feel of the book. Marvelous job!
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  • From ANON - DarkFire on June 05, 2004
    This story is crying for a sequel. Or maybe you can write more PP/WD adventures in NeverLand. ;P
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  • From ANON - Toki on May 31, 2004
    All alone
    under the trees of the forest, I dance
    with my hands outstretched. Look!
    A dream that sways in the sunlight filtering through trees.
    The winds of myth blow,
    touching my hair and fingers.
    Even in sadness, even in pain,
    as I travel to distant countries
    that shine with the light of the sun,
    the sun watches over me.
    Why is it
    that unsehinghings are so fascinating?
    An unknown place...
    A dream is calling me...
    It's warm in bare feet.
    The seeds are awakening too.
    Weak life, strong feelings.
    Even the birds know.
    Whenever I just sing,
    it seems to reach to the sky.
    The clouds reflected
    on the water's shimmering surface
    are wings on my back.
    Wearing only
    the fragrance of flowers,
    I set out.
    Even in sadness, even in pain,
    as I travel to distant countries
    that shine with the l of of the sun,
    the sun watches over me.
    I thought that these lyrics fit The whole story of Peter Pan quite well. I listened to this song on repeat while I was reading your story. It is actually in japanese, so really I had no idea what it ment until I looked up the lyrics. It kinda surprised me.
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  • From ANON - Toki on May 29, 2004
    I read this fic shortly after I saw the new Perter Pan movie. I have always loved the book since I was a little girl. Yet I have always hated the ending. The story you have told is the ending I think that it should have always had. I usually don't really care if the leading male and female roles of movies and books end up " together " but I have always thought that Wendy and Perter just belong together. But I didn't want for them to go and live in London and grow old. That would make me nearly as mad as them just going their seperte ways as they did. You have written a wonderful story, your lack of idealization just makes the story better. You are very talented, I hope that anything else of yours that I read is every bit as good as this one. ^.^ I will be sure to reckmend this here tale ta me freinas. I am sure they will love it as much as I.
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  • From ANON - kitty on May 26, 2004
    great job on this fic i absolutely love peter pan and wendy sts. is. i love how they ended up together. Peter Pan and Wendy are a great love couple. you should continue writing more stories about them because your stories are fantastic!
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  • From ANON - gatoion on May 25, 2004
    Yay! I have been looking for a good Peter Pan fanfiction all day and I finally found one! Thak you for writing such a wonderful fanfiction, I think I'll go see what else you have.

    -Gatoion
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