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Reviews for Awakenings

By : KimberlyA
  • From ANON - Chii on May 23, 2004
    This was an awsome story! If I had known you were writing this before it was finished I would have definetly written reviews! You have such a style of writing that grabs the reader and throws them into it's depths! You are indeed a very good writer and should be proud of it!

    Your descriptions totally filled me in and the realism with the sexual events was refreshing. Your character POV's were delightful to read and all I can say is thank you so much for sharing your work. It is highly appreciated and awed.

    -Thank you, once more.

    -Chii
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  • From ANON - amniarix on May 22, 2004
    Perfect, how perfect was that. I wish I had found this story when I first saw the movie - it is such a perfect companion piece to it. wel well written and the pace was never hurried or forced, it just unravelled beautifully. This is a truly lovely piece of writing and I wish I could offer you greater applause for it than just a little review - maybe roses and sunsets and crystal dreams for this lovely gift you have given to all of us. (Oh yeah, and the smut rocked, lol)
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  • From ANON - DarkFire on May 21, 2004
    Love it. You make a tale with adult content with great taste. The events aren't rush and the discover of Peter Pan body is enchanting. Keep the good work. I hope to read a sequel. Or maybe a completly new story. ;P DF
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  • From ANON - SnowWhiteWolf on May 19, 2004
    This is the best Peter and Wendy romance I've read,
    it's romantic and sweet and I couldn't stop reading it,
    if I could've stopped I would've reviewed all chapters.
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  • From ANON - Queenie on May 19, 2004
    Oh, I can't tell you how much I loved this story! I just sat and read it all in one sitting, it kept me hooked to the screen. By turns I smiled, laughed, got quite, quite turned on, ;), felt my heart almost break and then be put back together again... The magic and innocence you gave to this story was nothing short of brilliant, the way you described their feelings, their thoughts, it was perfect. Intensly erotic, but not smutty. I'm so glad I read this! I think I've read far too much pure porn in my life, it's great to read something a bit more subtle, yet still just as capable of making want to go seek out my man, or else have a little alone time ;)

    Thank you for writing this, and I'll be looking eagerly for more of your stuff!
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  • From ANON - Ashes on May 18, 2004
    Wow, is is one of the best fanfics I've ever read. It's just perfect for Peter and Wendy, its how the story should have turned out. Every time at the end of that movie I cry because she says, "And I never saw him again." I also love how you wrote about them awakening to sexuality, some of the things I read and felt complete de ja vu to previous experiences of my own. Peter was perfectly adorable, and so cute with the "Virginity" thing. This was very original and awesome. I don't know how you could further it, but please do write more. Again, awesome. :D

    Ashes

    "You know that place between sleep and awake, that place where you still remember dreaming...
    Thats where I'll always love you Peter Pan. Thats where I'll be waiting."
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  • From ANON - Nomi_Clawskull on May 17, 2004
    I bet you don't get many reviews! adult fic readers are review nazis.. its our naughty aspect! well anyway, awsome fic, i really don't find too many good balances of smut with romance writing.. thats the best kind of fic.. so keep up the good style!
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  • From ANON - kiddo on May 16, 2004
    WOW i really loved your story. i think that your style of writting was truly great. adn i hope that someday i might read more of your stories ^__^ great job dont let anyone tell u different.
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  • From ANON - Levia on May 14, 2004
    This is extremely sophisticated. I just came on this site and found that I was surrounded in plain smut with no plot. You are completely writing this, like really "writing" the lines and characterization is so right on the bat, that I'm thinking this could be completely canon were it not for the sexual context. This is very good and it should defenitely continue.
    Cheers!
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  • From ANON - Nee on May 13, 2004
    Wow, Z, I was thinking of that recently. Especially considering that Peter himself always wanted to be the child, how would he react to being responsible for a son or daughter? Could he deal with that? It would be awesome if our talented author would grace us with a sequel. I'd love to see how a baby might play out with Wendy and Peter. It sounds deliciously psychologically complicated!
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  • From Zuzanny on May 12, 2004
    I just had a thought. Immagine Peter's reaction to Wendy having a baby?!
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  • From Zuzanny on May 12, 2004
    That really was a beautiful fic. *sigh!* My eyes are shining like a strange anime character (if you know what I mean). Beautifully written. Big thumbs up!
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  • From ANON - Aliana on May 11, 2004
    This is beautifully written and I have enjoyed every chapter! You are truly talented!
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  • From ANON - Kari on May 10, 2004
    I loved your story! It was so nice to see a Peter Pan fic that wasn't a Hook/Pan! I would love to read more of your work :)
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  • From ANON - wendydarling on May 09, 2004
    oh my god! that is by far the best story i have ever read!!! You should like write a sequel or something, or another story i dunno but you are an amazing writer. Believe me i have read plenty of stories and this by far is the best story i have ever read in my entire life! Amazing job!
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