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Reviews for Neverland is Forever

By : LadyNightshade
  • From ANON - SilverWings on December 26, 2005
    OMG...*tear* I was hoping to read the next chapter XDD I got myself all giddy for nothing...wait I was giddy 4 chapters ago...what the hell am I saying? X3
    oh well IM SO SAVING THIS!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - ivorycoral on December 08, 2005
    This is actually really well-written, I'm impressed. I can't wait to see what happens int he next chapter.
    keep on writing, you have a real talent for it.
    Best of luck go with you, and all the Muses.
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  • From ANON - lay on November 19, 2005
    im sorry about your mother i no wat it feel like but the fic is realy good there
    no good PP things on here!!! but anyway keep updateing
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  • From ANON - mistic_kai_lover on November 05, 2005
    nice storrie!!!!! as soon as i read it it became one of my fafotites!!! so keep up te good work and when will you update? o and sorry if my english isn't that good.
    with love Mistic kai lover
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  • From LadyNightshade on November 01, 2005
    I apologize to all of you who have been trying to keep up with this story. I realize that my updating has been sporadic at best. Unfortunately, there has been a lot of things going on in my life as of late. Before it was a combination of school, computer dying, and trips abroad, but also, recently my mother passed away, and dealing with that stuff as well as everything else has caused many problems. But anyway, thank you very much for all of your faithful readerships, and hopefully soon I will have new chapters for all of you to enjoy.

    -LadyNightshade-
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  • From LadyNightshade on November 01, 2005
    I apologize to all of you who have been trying to keep up with this story. I realize that my updating has been sporadic at best. Unfortunately, there has been a lot of things going on in my life as of late. Before it was a combination of school, computer dying, and trips abroad, but also, recently my mother passed away, and dealing with that stuff as well as everything else has caused many problems. But anyway, thank you very much for all of your faithful readerships, and hopefully soon I will have new chapters for all of you to enjoy.

    -LadyNightshade-
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  • From ANON - wildly_unreal on July 17, 2005
    Oh man! I love this! You're such a good writer! The chapters need to be a little longer, though. ;) You've caught Peter's character perfectly.
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  • From ANON - Marietta on June 21, 2005
    HOT DAMN. I hope you're still working on this.
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  • From ANON - hara on June 18, 2005
    please, please write more. i need to know what happens >.>

    love to you for actually having a plot, too!
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  • From ANON - Morgan on May 29, 2005
    Hurry and update. I like the story and I want to find out what happens.
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  • From ANON - Enelya by Ulmo on May 25, 2005
    Oh, my child... Have not known? The true trend in your OFC's is that they are mild Mary-Sues. (blue-violet? Sorry; not genetically possible) But at least no full Mary-Sues. But the whole, "cynical, street-smart, gone-through-more-than-canon thing is the generic description of this new breed of Mary-Sue. She is more "realistic," the usage of former word I state in only the broadest sense; she doesn't have an old-style name like Elizabthia or Tel' Lindir *No ofence, ZeeDrippyVessel*, but she is used wuite frequently. I do, however, commend your correct grammatical usage and lack of spelling errors. You ar not a Mary-Sue authoress, only an authoress caught with a Mari Su. Change your characters; less perfect. Make her a bit angry. Oh, and, her parents' death is a common Mary-Sue, I'd suggest not using it again unless it's canon. Otherwise, I enjjoyed it.
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  • From ANON - JWM on May 19, 2005
    Very unusual, but interesting. Is Tiger-lily going to fit into this? Also, how old is Peter?
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  • From ANON - DarkMystic on March 05, 2005
    Never ever thought I would witness peter do that. O.o *Cough!.* Anyways, please continue, I wanna read more, its a great story, and im curious as to what will happen. You're doing great. ^_^
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  • From ANON - Lane on February 28, 2005
    oh my god! that was absolutely delicious!
    btw. i would love to beta for you. n.n your story is soooooooooo good!
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  • From ANON - Nita on January 28, 2005
    I love it. It's so innocent and sensual! It's so great.
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