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Reviews for Consequences

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  • From ANON - Nanz on July 20, 2004
    My goodness, I suddenly feel very warm.
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  • From ANON - Jo on July 19, 2004
    Awesome. Hfuckfucking shit, to be eloquent. That was really, really goMaybMaybe just a little bit of grammatical problems,
    but the dialogue was lifelike and in the style of LKH, the sex was VERY enticing, and it was just absolutely spec-fucking-tacular.
    I had lots of fun with Anita being pregnant, too. You did it just right,totally realistic. Good job.
    You did your research, too. I have nothing to complain about, and that's rare, cause I'm picky about my AB:VH stuff.

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  • From ANON - Nanz on July 18, 2004
    That was very sweet.
    What are they going to do about Richard?
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  • From ANON - celtpriest on July 17, 2004
    I am really LOVING this story! Thank you, and please...write fast!!!!
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  • From ANON - Nanz on July 16, 2004
    Glad JC took it well.
    I wonder what Jason will say?
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  • From ANON - Nanz on July 14, 2004
    She really needs to talk to JC.
    What will he say and what will Jason say.
    More soon please
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  • From ANON - johari on July 13, 2004
    It would be great if you could stretch out the dialogue, give us much more Nathaniel, give Anita violent mood swings, have Anita physically attack Jean-Claude to save Jason, make Jason amped! about Fatherhood, have the pard and various characters voting on baby names in secret, give Anita bedrest (which she refuses to carry out,) make Nathaniel a baby expert, make JC demand to be present at the birth, make it twins- or a litter of four (okay, that might be too outrageous,) make this a really, really long story, make a sequel where the child/children grow (s) up. Uhh ... Yeah, any of those things would be good. :)
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  • From ANON - johari on July 13, 2004
    SO! Consequences is really great! I am a bit of an ass because I never review stories, but I had to let you know that this one is GREAT! Mostly because I am a big fan of Anite-with-child stories, but also because it's well written. You even begin to capture the tone of Hamilton's Anita with the stubborn agressiveness, but I don't remember any wisecracks or jokes used to deflect her anxiety.

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  • From ANON - Nanz on July 13, 2004
    She better tell him soon and I hope Micah is right and JC doesn't get made.
    Looking forward to the next chapter.
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  • From ANON - Madettica on July 13, 2004
    OMG This is sooooooooo sooooooo goood KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK! I await the next chapter with baited breath!
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  • From ANON - lalaland on July 11, 2004
    YAY!! you finally are posting your story! love it lots.
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  • From ANON - nonny for Anonymous on July 10, 2004
    Wonderful. It was highly erotic. *basks in the afterglow...er...whatever...*

    I can't wait to read who the other male is... *smirks*

    - nonny
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  • From ANON - Janet on July 09, 2004
    Like it a lot. I look forward to seeing more!
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