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Reviews for Consequences

By : Sabriel0405
  • From ANON - Luna on April 03, 2013
    Wonderful work! I have long wished to read a story that plays what if, with the situation Hamilton presented and this was just perfect. I only regret we never got to see her baby.
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  • From NatashaSerrano on September 04, 2007
    Sooooooo good!!! one of the best stories I've read, loved how u ended it..!
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  • From Keaseakea on April 26, 2007
    Absolutely awesome. This is actually BETTER then the books themselves. Please write more.
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  • From ANON - Sadie Hyde on July 08, 2005
    At first I wasn't overly impressed with the idea- Anita pregnant? Agh. But damn, you really, really made it work. Your characterizations are amazing- so spot on. Also quickly- the sex was hot- that's always fun to read, but it was the last few chapters that really moved me. I absolutely LOVED the way you wrote Jason, reminding all of us he's not just the mindless flirt- you've really done justice to the character. I loved Jean-Claude's bathing of her in the hospital- I'm an RN and I suspect you've got some experience w/seriously ill people and the whole vigil thing, and the way that doing things like that, bathing the patient, calms the family and loved ones, makes them feel that they're helping. And when you had Anita question all those exact same things we wonder about her- like how she basically treats everyone in her life like dirt yet they still love her- I was practically cheering. Overall the story was great- the last few chapters weren't great- They were really phenomenal. I think as you can tell by the 57 previous reviews, there's quite a few of us who would love to read more of your work. Thank you for an amazing read.
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  • From ANON - MarzBar on April 16, 2005
    Just found this story and read it straight through. I really enjoyed it and this is coming from a non-Anita fan. Thank you for sharing.
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  • From ANON - Kitsune on April 02, 2005
    I don't know how I could expand on what the others have said. I just hope
    You will be writing more stories with the talant you have I would look forward
    to reading anything you produce.
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  • From ANON - George Cooper, aka BelleRose on February 26, 2005
    Vunderbar! Solomente perfecto! Incroyable! Ichi ban! Bloody briliant! Wow!
    One of my most important rules is to never give false flattery, so when I say that your story is great you can rest assured that I'm not kidding. I'm a book-o-holic and since I don't have too much expendable cash I tend to haunt the fanfiction websites, especially, but not only, the Anitaverse sites. After that all I can say is wow. In english at least. At certain parts in the story I got so caught up that I was just a bundle of nerves feeling Anita's emotions, yet not feeling anything at all, if that makes any sense.
    Anyway, I love what you've written so far and I hope you write some more. How do Asher and Jean-Claude deal? Or Damien, or Nathaniel? And how did Raphael know? Can Anita ever have kids again or is she s.o.l.? Is Richard angry at Jason? Does Richard blame Anita or Jason or himself?
    Continue writing. Also, the only advice I can give is to use a program like Word or another word processor to correct mistakes and mixed up words. But the plot... Wow, you don't need ANY help THERE!
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  • From ANON - noah/vail on January 02, 2005
    I like this more everytime I read it.
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  • From ANON - JJ on November 22, 2004
    WoW!!! Great story, well plotted and very interesting. You showed real knowledge of character history and developed all the elements of the story to a logical conclusion. I particularily enjoyed how well you stayed true to L.H.'s characters and yet put them in new situations and interesting plot lines that continued developing their personalities. Please dream up some more stories!
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  • From ANON - Sarah on September 26, 2004
    This is simply the best Anita Blake fanfiction i have ever read. This reads like its from Ms. Hamilton herself and I have no greater compliment. Please write more. You are very talented!
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  • From ANON - AIMIE on September 24, 2004
    Beautifully done, perfect 10. You have a rare talent for writing that should be blossomed more.
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  • From ANON - Anon on September 17, 2004
    Suuch a beautiful fic!!! You've totally outdone yourself; the character interactions, dialoge, and emotions were spot on! I was nearly in tears at the end, but I'm glad it ended the way it did; it wouldn't have been nearly as poignent or given the characters as much of a chance for development if they'd all lived happily ever after. I hope you'll decide to write more stories soon!!!
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  • From ANON - GrrArrg on September 16, 2004
    That was wonderful, I absolutely loved it.

    Heartbreaking and emotional.

    Thank you

    GrrArrg
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  • From ANON - BrendaLee on September 16, 2004
    You have me in tears right now, and trust me, that is a feat in and of itself.
    Take that as the highest compliment from me. On a technical level, you are an accomplished writer. On an emotional level, you are incredible. Everyone is very much in-character, and the plot is believable, not to mention the emotions of the characters. The last paragraph ties up the story nicely. WOW!!!
    Eagerly awaiting Incubus Dreams
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  • From ANON - margot on September 12, 2004
    Absolutely beautifully written. The characterization was very well done and the story line was realistic and riveting. i loved reading every second of your story. Please continue writting AB fanfic. i promise i'll read it all.
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