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Reviews for To be Filled

By : Nesia
  • From TeaGirl on May 02, 2008
    Horatio: (aside)
    Mayhaps for he to mount and fill my corpse.

    AWWWWWWWWWWW!!!! ok, i'm no pro in the english language but i was filled with absolute delight while reading this fic. it's short and i wish it were longer. also that you do continue this. i love how you tried to keep it in playwrite, and i'm just giddy at the thought of horatio hooking up with fortinbras! now if only we had more shakespare slash on AF. =)

    thank you for the fic!
    much love~!
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  • From ANON - Amaltea 480 on November 23, 2006
    It's wonderful? simply awesome!;)
    I like the whole idea and your mimic writing style is also well done.
    The real Shakespeare fanfiction I guess.;)
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  • From ANON - A on October 13, 2006
    It's a valiant effort at Shakespearean prose, but (obviously) doesn't match the man himself. That being said, definitely one of the things worth reading around here.
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  • From ANON - Korin on December 14, 2005
    Wow. This is really cool. It reminds me slightly of a fic I wrote and am about to post here. It is altogether awesome; good job!
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  • From ANON - Anon on October 26, 2005
    Great job, except your iambic pentameter is not iambic. That is just really bothering me, but besides that, this is really good.
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  • From ANON - malcara on August 23, 2005
    it was vey interesting.....you've got shakespeare's language down pat. congragulations. that's quite an achievement. I'll keep reading to see how this goes....
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  • From ANON - kat8cha on March 28, 2005
    Since I am a slash!whore I've been meaning to get around to reading Hamlet slash. Yours definitly struck a chord. I'd love it if you continued it, and maybe some Fortinbras/Horatio? Even after F's last speech. You're really good at writing this and I like how you keep the chap's short so as not to overstress the iambic.
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  • From WildeOscar on July 16, 2004
    Interesting. Imabic pentameter is difficult to write, still more so is to keep up the word play and connontations of Shakespeare. Iambic pent is down in this fic, which, kudos, is good. Not getting the double meaning that Shakespeare imbues his work with, which is something to work on. It's a little too straightforward, you should need to find the deeper meaning behind the words.

    But not everyone can write Shakespeare. So yeah, good work.
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