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Reviews for Birthday

By : pleasures0901
  • From ANON - Rayven Nocturne on June 09, 2005
    You can't write, you can't spell, and you have no talent. Why did you even bother to post this? I could write better if I was drunk and high at the same time! You're terrible! Learn to spell before posting something! It was just plain awful! One of the worst fics that I have ever read. It's bad. And the people that reviewed this probably can't even write a decent fic themselves! I hope you never write anything ever again!
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  • From Katy on September 27, 2004
    a good start can't wait to see how anita greets him when he gets up.
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  • From on September 14, 2004
    holy shit that was a great story. It sent shivers down my spine. good work. keep it up...
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  • From on September 14, 2004
    good story. surprised u spelled Jean claudes nickname for anita wrong. ANd from reading the books that anita...well she hates him and wants him at the same time. good story..cant wait to read the next story
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  • From ANON - Lukeila on September 05, 2004
    I think you have good fic, but you have some minor errors with spelling, format & mechanics.
    I don't mean to nitpick, it's just that I notice things like that due to the many hours spent in Expository Writing classes.
    Other than that, your story has creative content and was very fun to read.
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  • From ANON - Chibihana on July 31, 2004
    It was a good story but you don't know how to spell. It's "ma petite", not "ma piete"...that part fucked it up...keep writind und use spellcheck next time you write a story.
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  • From ANON - rerae on July 22, 2004
    Funny.
    To bad Anita can't let go and live a little in the books.
    I liked the surprise. It was unexpected but believeable.
    Ran across several typos. If you need a beta just sent your stories my way.
    Reesa
    4 stars
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  • From ANON - Johanna on July 20, 2004
    Kinda mediocre, but kinda good too. Not the best-written sex scene, but you captured Anita's sarcasm pretty well.
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  • From ANON - gojoba on July 19, 2004
    i love anita/jc. cute story. however, it would be a little easier to read if you formatted it into clearly defined paragraphs (traditionally each time a person speaks, he/she gets their own paragraph.) and if you wanted to condense it into fewer chapters, since the chappies themselves aren't that long, that would also make reading it a little easier. the story itsels grs great though!! hope to read more from you soon.
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  • From ANON - anon on July 19, 2004
    hey this story was great!
    i hope that this isnt the end though.
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  • From ANON - Eve B Hart on July 18, 2004
    I love it so far. Just a little thing: Anita was already 26 in NiC, so it would have to be her 27th. But ignoring that, I thought it was great.
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