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By : FairlightMuse
  • From ANON - ancientgirl on November 06, 2004
    Not very good? No, no, no! This was a lovely chapter, thank you so much for updating. I look every day, just in case. I can't wait for James to meet her parents, I have a feeling it will be quite interesting.

    Please tell that muse of yours to get cracking!
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  • From ANON - pookie on November 04, 2004
    I love this story! It is sooo cute, please continue.
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  • From ANON - Kidwyn on November 01, 2004
    I loved this story!!! I've just spent about an hour and a half reading the entire thing and I love it!! Truly an inspired theme, I think you captured that side of Hook that all men try and conceal. You also hit on the one weakness that affects us all - child or adult - love and affection. They are a two sided sword. Not until my son was born did I realize you could actually have so much love for someone that you'd do ANYTHING to protect them. But that love also works against you if their well-being is put in jeopardy, like a bargaining chip. It's a fine line between sanities! Kepp up the great work!
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  • From ANON - jillij on October 20, 2004
    Almost crying here! I'm probably going to in a minute or so. How cruel! Make Peter Pan become a man! * sniffs * I do so love your devious mind though. It's absolutely horrid! * grins * I can't wait to see what happens next.... ta
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  • From ANON - ancientgirl on October 20, 2004
    Great chapter, nice and long, please don't feel you should apologize for that. I write fanfic as well, and hey sometimes a chapter is short and sometimes its long, that's just the way it plays in your head. Sometimes things don't fit in a certain place, so it winds up being a short chapter, other times we get to writing and can't seem to stop. This chapter was wonderful, and I love the punishement Wendy has for Peter, its truly his worst fear.

    Please update again soon.
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  • From ANON - ancientgirl on October 20, 2004
    Great chapter, nice and long, please don't feel you should apologize for that. I write fanfic as well, and hey sometimes a chapter is short and sometimes its long, that's just the way it plays in your head. Sometimes things don't fit in a certain place, so it winds up being a short chapter, other times we get to writing and can't seem to stop. This chapter was wonderful, and I love the punishement Wendy has for Peter, its truly his worst fear.

    Please update again soon.
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  • From ANON - ancientgirl on October 20, 2004
    Great chapter, nice and long, please don't feel you should apologize for that. I write fanfic as well, and hey sometimes a chapter is short and sometimes its long, that's just the way it plays in your head. Sometimes things don't fit in a certain place, so it winds up being a short chapter, other times we get to writing and can't seem to stop. This chapter was wonderful, and I love the punishement Wendy has for Peter, its truly his worst fear.

    Please update again soon.
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  • From ANON - Avanell on October 20, 2004
    I have a complaint! Not long enough! Tee-hee...I just KNEW that would be Peter's punishment (at least, it is what I hoped...what I would do...am I that wicked, too?!!) Loved the ups,ups, the bedside talk, and stutter stuff, too! Can't wait to see more more more!!! That's how we comment at the Jix board...we rave and rant for more!!!
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  • From ANON - ancientgirl on October 16, 2004
    Great chapter. You did a good job with the action. I'm glad Peter was caputred (that stupid spoiled brat!) Please update soon! Please, I know you aren't going to kill Hook. I hope!
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  • From ANON - Avanell on October 15, 2004
    Brava Brava! You have me sitting at the edge of my seat! This story is just amazing...and recent lines about storms and seas, men being pretty, the ring engraved, and now Pan coming after Hook...I'm dying in anticipation at the edge of my seat! Wah! Hook has to live! He and Wendy must show Peter their love or kill the little imp in the process! Okay, I'm not trying to dictate here...but Hook and Wendy just BELONG together here!!! Can't wait for more...Brava!

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  • From ANON - ancientgirl on October 14, 2004
    Ugh! Don't let that little runt hurt my Hook, PLEASE!!!!! Great chapter. Thanks for updating.
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  • From ANON - jillij on October 09, 2004
    more? please? ta
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  • From ANON - Oz on September 30, 2004
    I LOVE THIS STORY!

    I admit I have not read alot of Pan stories.. but I cannot resist pirates!
    That he has waited for her to be ready for him.. truly ready and needing.
    So much better than if her had forced her at first.
    I do hope you will be updating soon!

    Oz
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  • From ANON - jillij on September 30, 2004
    * glares at you * end? no! more please * whimpe jil
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  • From Ardeo on September 30, 2004
    You fiend! How dare you not continue??? I need to go find a large block of ice or something. Whew. That was hot. :-)
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