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By : FairlightMuse
  • From ANON - jillij on September 29, 2004
    you can't just leave it there....more please....ta
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  • From ANON - Kenshi on September 29, 2004
    'I Promise' is the most scrum-diddly-umptious 'Peter Pan' fan fiction I've ever read. I love the way Captain Hook is shown not as a heartless villian, but as a man who can also feel and desire (and awake desire too ^_^). Please keep the chapters coming, as I'm craving to read more. Fine piece of adult fan fiction...
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  • From ANON - ancientgirl on September 25, 2004
    Oh wow, great chapters. Thanks for giving us two at a time, but I'm greedy and want more, especially after that cliffhanger. Please update soon!!!!
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  • From DarlaTook on September 23, 2004
    I love this story soooo much! I can't wait for the next chapter. Keep writing!
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  • From ANON - JustDuck on September 22, 2004
    Hee!

    I loved this chapter! Talk about de ja vu when the Captain cornered her in her bedroom! Too bad Smee had to interrupt! ::wink::
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  • From ANON - ksevfansd on September 19, 2004
    you are most definately teasing us. I can't wait for the next part!
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  • From ANON - bon on September 19, 2004
    Waahooyah, FairlightMuse! This is juicy! I've read fic and I've read fic but this...Wendy and Hoois ois one thrilling consideration. Spacing or no...just keep writing. And thank you! Bon
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  • From ANON - jillij on September 18, 2004
    oooo how very delightful! James is turning out quite nicely, as is Wendy. I hope they don't aggravate you too much, especially seeing as they are both very stubborn. Usually my stubborn characters run away with the story and usually * grins * all my characters are stubborn. Anyhow, I can't wait for chapter nine.... ta
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  • From ANON - Isis33 on September 17, 2004
    I begun reading with some hesitation, as somhow, most Hook fics seem to follow the same path. But I must confess that I love this. The sense of humour you have gifted them both with- I always did suspect that Hook had a sense of humour somewhere. Still, you can still sense that he is a dangerous man and Wendy will probably do weel to keep on his good side. Well, she seem quite good at that. Will look forward for more.
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  • From ANON - ancientgirl on September 16, 2004
    A NEW CHAPTER IS UP!!! A NEW CHAPTER IS UP!!!! (she cries as she runs round the living room). I....loved....this....chapter!!! You know there aren't very many Hook/Wendy stories out there, and the ones that I have found have all had so much angst, but this one is a bit playful and romantic, I just love it.

    Thank you so much for updating this. I love your Hook. He is very much in character, but we also have a chance to see a side of him we did not get to see in the movie, which is the "I want this woman" side of him. I have to say I think he was quite sexual in the movie, but then again maybe it was because the very lucious Jason Isaacs was playing him. Please don't keep us waiting too long for another chapter.
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  • From ANON - DDMalfoy on September 14, 2004
    Hey great chapter. Thank you sooo much for the spacing, it makes the story so much easier to read which of course makes it more enjoyable. I like the way they both seem to be playing with each other. Poor Smee, now he'll have to cook for everyeone. I'll tell you though, if Wendy doesn't want to be Hook's private valet, I would love to voluteer myself for the ahem, position.
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  • From ANON - ancientgirl on September 14, 2004
    I absolutely love your story, and I adore your Hook. He is so playful, but still a rouge trying to steel kisses from ladies. I mean yes he's still a violent man, but hey he's a pirate. Please keep going, I love it!!!!!
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  • From ANON - jillij on September 14, 2004
    wait! more? That was very nice but shame on James for manipulating her like so....he probably even killed the cook just for that, or had him killed.... sorry my brain is fried, it happens when you read too much fan-fiction adn Flying With Eagles is going to be the death of me....as will this story. I HATE YOU ALL! * whimpers * sorry, I just wish I could write so well as you and Zar. Zar made me cry like a baby earlier this afternoon. * glares at you * and no doubt you will too, eventually. * runs away * ta
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  • From ANON - ksevfansd on September 14, 2004
    Very good! I can't wait to see what Wendy's new duties are. thanks for updating so quickly. Keep it up!
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  • From ANON - MissCritic on September 14, 2004
    Very good. This just slay me:

    " You merely attend to my every wish and command. Is that so difficult.?"

    " It might not be agreeable."

    " Oh I think it could be downright enjoyable..."

    Wendy isn't going to succumb altogether easily to the good Captain, is she? Thank you for spacing up the text, it's so much easier to follow now.
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