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By : FairlightMuse
  • From ANON - Eire on September 14, 2004
    Really excellent story so far. I loved some of Hook's lines in this chap Pl Please keep the updates coming - am very much looking forward to more.
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  • From ANON - Duchess on September 13, 2004
    This is excellent. I eagerly await the next chapter.
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  • From ANON - DDMalfoy on September 11, 2004
    Great story. But please just a few little suggestions. Paragraphs should always be separated. And when you start a dialoge it should always be separated as well from the paragraph. For example:

    "hello"

    "Hello yourself"

    Like this. It makes it easier to read and it makes it easier to read the characters dialogue.

    I hope you have a new chapter for us soon.
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  • From ANON - MissCritic on September 11, 2004
    I'm enjoying this story very much and I look forward to see more of it. And I promise, most Hook fics makes me push the back button within a few paragraph.

    But, though your story is interesting enough to be read anyway, the formating is a bit trying for the old eyes. If you left a blank space between paragraphs and also evertime a new peron speaks, it would be easier to read. I also had to re-read some lines as it was a bit too easy to get tangled up in whom it was who was speaking. I'm afraid some people get scared awaen ien it's hard to read and that would be a pity as your story is well wort reading. And it really isn't your story that there is anything wrong with.
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  • From ANON - ancientgirl on September 07, 2004
    I love Hook/Wendy stories, especially steamy ones. I can't wait to read how Wendy earns her keep.
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  • From ksevfansd on September 07, 2004
    Hook is so evil! I am looking forward to more. eagerly looking forward to more. This is a great story! The best Peter Pan story I have read. update soon.
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  • From ANON - jillij on September 04, 2004
    eh, but, ah, no, wait! Not fair! want more.... please? * whimpers *
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  • From ANON - ksevfansd on September 04, 2004
    Brilliant!!! You not only kept me on the edge of my seat but you also left me wanting more. The ending of this chapter was perfect with Wendy and Hook staring at each other and the rest of the world silent. Bravo. Please update soon.
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  • From ANON - sailor_fussion on September 02, 2004
    Great story keeep the chapters coming
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  • From ANON - PercyGal on September 02, 2004
    Oh, I LOVE this story! Indeed, poor Wendy, she has no idea what she's getting into. Let it be bad... *wink* Please continue with writing! It's wonderful and original.
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  • From ANON - MissCritic on August 31, 2004
    It's an interesting beginning and I look forward to read more. You do know that it can be a double meaning to Hook saying that he is going to kill her? An orgasm is not called "the little death" for nothing...
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  • From ANON - ksevfansd on August 31, 2004
    Great chapter! Just enough to "hook" us in. More soon, please.
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  • From ANON - ksevfansd on August 29, 2004
    I am eagerly looking forward to your next update. I guess I will have to be content with watching Peter Pan, again.
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  • From ANON - ksevfansd on August 25, 2004
    Very good beginning! you got the characters just right. I can't wait for the next part! update soon. please.
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