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Reviews for Love of the Ghost

By : GlassAngel
  • From on November 26, 2005
    aww, he didnt stay with me! *tear*

    good story though, but i doubt he was a virgin . . . ^_-

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  • From ANON - Onitsu Blackfeather on September 03, 2005
    You know, every time I read this I love it. It is so sweet and romantic with a little light bondage for kinkiness ;) Though there are a few gramatical and spelling errors. I think that some information was messed up if you were transitioning it from a program to here.
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  • From ANON - The Angel of Music on July 09, 2005
    Wow...someone has fantasies...but it's okay, because don't we all? Except those damned RC shippers...*burns RC shippers!!!!!* But only imagine if a male were to click on your story title...
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  • From ANON - spak on February 25, 2005
    This is probably going to be your first *real* review, as I am somewhat of an editor and beta-reader, being a Literature student and all. I just wandered into this section of the site out of curiousity, as I've read the novel and recently seen the film.

    First off, I'd like to congratulate you on a fairly well-written first fic. It's rare that someone can pull off writing in second person, as more often than not it winds up sounding cliché. However, you've managed to do it quite well, considering you're a first-timer. There are a few tips and pointers I can give you, and if you'd like, you can email me at the address above and I'll give you a full beta on it. There were a few spelling and grammatical errors, but nothing too horrible in that department. As far as the smut goes, you've written out a fairly familiar fantasy for pretty much any woman who has seen the film. All I can say is, Gerard Butler makes a very yummy Phantom. :D

    At any rate, drop me a line if you want a real beta on your work, I'd be more than willing to give you my opinion and some tips.

    Spak
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  • From ANON - FunkyPixieChick on February 18, 2005
    That was hot. Well that and because I spilled steaming hot chocolate on my wrist while I was reading it, but trust me, your story added to the throbbing sensation that pulsated in my hand. Nice work, and I especially like how the reader is tied up with his weapon of death. Really cool touch.
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  • From ANON - Salomé on February 01, 2005
    This is really good! It's not often that one comes across stories of this type that make it a personal fantasy for the reader. Since probably every woman who comes here and reads these fics has had a personal fantasy about the Phantom, I think it's well in order. Great job!
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  • From on January 30, 2005
    Wow, this was really good! The only thing that I see wrong are some spelling errors. You wrote "Quiet" which means to be silent. But you really meant "quite". But please continue writing!
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  • From ANON - Piama on January 20, 2005
    Gawd, that was sexy!!! Sounds like one of my crazy sexy deams I had after seeing the movie. Gerard Butler made one hot Phantom!
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  • From ANON - Alexandra Paris on January 19, 2005
    OMG! This story was hot! And I just recently saw the film!
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  • From RipeWickedPlum00 on January 19, 2005
    Okay this was really cheesy, cliched and semi-badly written. But I have to admit that I have been guilty of a similar fantasy in my head at times... Ah well.... I think we all have....

    I could accuse this of being Mary Sue... but since it's in the POV that it is in, I don't think it qualifies. Regardless, it's an okay fic, but needs more work.
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  • From ANON - Kristine on January 16, 2005
    Ooooh...That was good...Deliciously good...One question: Did you make Erik immortal or something?!! Or am I just supposed to relinquish my brain to the Goddess of Plot Discontinuities and just enjoy imagining myself surrendering to the Phantom?!! :) Because I don't mind that at allllllll....
    FANTABULOUS!! A few typos that confused me, but I loved every minute of it!
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  • From ANON - leto2atreides on January 15, 2005
    wow ôo that was just WOW ... no more words needed (in fact... i'm not really able to write more words at the moment) ;)
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  • From ANON - pissiMissi (not logged in) on January 13, 2005
    It's me again. I just wanted to know if you will be writing more stories. I noticed you wrote this in 2003 are you still active? *poke poke* I would love to hear more from you. ^-^ Your work is amazing.
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  • From angedelamusique on January 13, 2005
    pretty decent aside from some typos that made some sentences hard to read. I liked it, the story was pretty good and yea, the ending was a bit sad but hell, it was a fun ride. lol. good job
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  • From ANON - Aminta on January 12, 2005
    I really enjoyed how the story was written in second person - YUM!
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