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Reviews for My Candyman

By : LoonyLucifer
  • From ANON - Nekko akki Lynx on August 01, 2005
    this is a really good story and i love it!~!!! please update soon!
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  • From on August 01, 2005
    2nd chapter, starting to think we have a new Michel Jackson on our hands. Only if it's Willy Wonka, then it's cool! ^_^
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  • From ANON - ladythief15 on August 01, 2005
    School? Hmm...Wonder what Mr. Wonka is going to think of that. *ponders* Anywho! This fic is great!! You put in the just right amount of details. I love it! And I'm really looking forward to more Charlie/Mr.Wonka scenes. ^-^ Gotta love them. Update soon! I'm really looking forward to continue reading this fic!! Keep up the great work!
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  • From LadyWindermere on July 30, 2005
    update!
    I reall, really like this. :D Especially Wonka. ...so deliciously fucked up. ;D
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  • From ANON - tag on July 29, 2005
    write more!!! I can't wait to see what happens next! this is great!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Hazel on July 25, 2005
    I love this. I absolutely love this! *claws desperately* Pleasepleasepleasepleaaaasseee get the next chapter out as soon as possible ;___; I love your fic, and I love you ;w;
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  • From ANON - Sapphire Artemis on July 24, 2005
    To quote Mr. Wonka, "Wow!"

    I must admit, I had my doubts about reading this story, as I normally try to stay away from minor. But this story is excellent! You portray everything in a very life-like way (I laughed when Wonka was making pancakes 'cause I can just imagine him doing that!) and you didn't make them jump right in the sex. (I do so hope that, when you do, you can let Charlie, ah..."feel around" a bit on Wonka? XP)

    I have one word of caution: be careful about the sex. Wonka as portrayed in the movie seemed a very socially inadequate guy. He wouldn't be the type to take control--maybe nudge a bit, but yeah. However, Charlie is young, so he wouldn't either...ah, hell. You'll handle it beautifully, I know it. =)

    Update soon!
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  • From ANON - vivilover69 on July 24, 2005
    oh, darn, no more chapters??? it's actually pretty good ^^
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  • From ANON - nobu on July 23, 2005
    wonderful story! Definitely enjoying this. Keep writing.
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  • From ANON - TheGoddessofDeath on July 22, 2005
    I have been reading this for a while...and i'm just now getting around to reviewing. Love it,dear. Keep it up. It's fantasically wonderful ^^.
    I love your use of vocabulary a lot. It's very much like the books.

    ~Corynne
    TheGoddessofDeath
    Alone-At-Nite (on DA)
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  • From ANON - thehomicidalmaniac777 on July 22, 2005
    I'm loving the fic so far, though I'd prefer it if Charlie was at least a teenager. Oh well. It's well written, and I can't wait for more! I'm debating on writing a fic between Willy Wonka and a original male character...though having my character hit on him...with wonka eventually giving in. something along those lines anyway. hope you update soon!
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  • From ANON - Sakata Ri Houjun on July 20, 2005
    It's certainly odd to put these characters into a sexual situation since Dahl's universe is well-seeped in innocence. Yet you write with a similar prose to the late author that it blends in rather spendidly, even if I am opposed to shouta, particularly when based on realistic characters. That whole Micheal Jackson vibe. LOL
    The tune you made reference to is actually entitled 'Twisted Nerve'. Quite a clever piece indeed, certainly unique enough for Wonka to whistle, if not at the very least creepy.
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  • From ANON - InnocenceKept on July 20, 2005
    Oh my God I was so happy to see a section for Charlie and the Chocolate Factory!! First ficcie read here, and I say it is incredibly great!! I do hope you continue very soon, I want to see more going on!!! *Squeal*
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  • From swkaioshin on July 19, 2005
    hey good story so far! ive never really though about this pairing before, but u write it good and i like it. please continue!
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  • From ANON - asdf on July 19, 2005
    when are you going to update!?? common! dont give up now...your starting a whole new willy wonka fanfic fad!! hahahah pl plz plz update!
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