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Reviews for SLEEPOVER

By : Kttopper
  • From ANON - julie on August 06, 2005
    Eh, it was okay. Could have been smuttier.
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  • From ANON - amy on July 23, 2005
    ok.

    that just totally sucked

    die plz
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  • From ANON - Cassidy on June 30, 2005
    yay!!!
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  • From ANON - no name on June 26, 2005
    Definitely adult oriented. Keep writing to improve your skills.
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  • From ANON - theCrow on May 18, 2005
    That... well... this is fanfiction after all... keep writing if you want
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  • From ANON - Anon on May 11, 2005
    dear god that sucked...
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  • From ANON - diana on May 07, 2005
    hey i like your story its really good!!! thought about adding any more chapters??
    email me!
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  • From ANON - Anon on April 28, 2005
    not as steamy as i hoped
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  • From LosaLou on April 15, 2005
    Hm... Interesting
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  • From copewithit on April 12, 2005
    Wow. That was a little awkward to read. I can understand the jumping around from perspective to perspective, but this is insane. You need to develop your ideas more, add detail into your work, and try to refrain from putting ‘Mia’s POV’ and whatnot to distinguish the change. A simple break in paragraphs would work fine enough. I think that you should write more, just expand on your ideas.
    ciao,
    cope
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  • From ANON - Nee on February 15, 2005
    No offense, but the site is for adults and you CLEARLY can't possibly be an adult by any stretch of the imagination. LIttle kiddies should not be writing about things they know nothing about. Your writing reads like a grade school assignment with some amateur smut added in. What is it with adding "I can't spell OMGWTF!!!111" in the middle of the story, anyway? Bad, bad writing.
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