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Reviews for A Rose of Desire

By : schnizz
  • From ANON - Iolanthe on January 09, 2007
    Beautiful story hun!
    *Bites'n'Nibbles*
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  • From ANON - julie on August 04, 2005
    Very nice! Erik sure deserved some action!
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  • From ANON - Anna on June 14, 2005
    I'm not criticizing your writing style or talent, but... how is Erik a virgin sex god? He's never kissed a woman, let alone slept with one.
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  • From ANON - dan on June 03, 2005
    the phantom is a tenor. other than that it was good.
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  • From ANON - Andrea on March 23, 2005
    Don't listen to thoes other shity people. Who cares if they don't like it. I love it. So fuck them. Sorry you other reviewers. But who cares how old you are? Who cares is the author has naver had sex? I know a 10 year old who writes sex sceans. How old are you people? Cause I'm sure your not as old as me. But anyhow. Good fanfic. Update soon. I have to see what happens next!
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  • From ANON - Death on March 23, 2005
    All I can say is update soon! ^_^
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  • From ANON - xXErik\'sXMotherxX on March 23, 2005
    Loved it. Update soon. That rocked! Erik is so horny. lol! ^_~
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  • From ANON - Lady Blackmour on February 16, 2005
    Hmm...well, I think you're a pretty good writer. If I'm gonna have Erik in a PWP, however, I prefer it to be with Christine, because they at least have some background. I have nothing against OW stories, not at all. In fact, I tend to like them. But, I don't like having no backstory for the character.

    The actual smut is a little cliche. I personally find the mood is broken when technical words like "G-spot" or porno words like "Cock" are used, but that is just my personal preference. My advice is edit the wording a little to make it more period and consider giving us a whole story for this character. Doesn't have to be real long, maybe just a few chapters, but it could help a lot, I think. ^_^
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  • From ANON - alexandra on February 10, 2005
    This was hot! I hope you will continue.
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  • From ANON - daygonna on February 07, 2005
    woah, very nicely done. i really liked this story and hope u might consider making another one. if not this will make a great one shot as well. once again, good job
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