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Reviews for When the Moon Rises

By : ozumasgirl
  • From AgentLaLorona on October 07, 2007
    I liked it. Thought, shouldn't said condom be lubricated? Soooo, it shoulda been easier on Klaus?
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  • From Fang13 on June 22, 2007
    Great! Think of a nother part to this tory but with Violet!
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  • From ANON - Nny11 on September 17, 2006
    I know it's hard to continue with older fics but I would still love to see you continue this. It's still great (though author's comments shouldn't be in the middle of the fic, so as not to take away), there are honestly few muck ups and its one of the better written things up here. I'll give you some cake...
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  • From Gazette on August 26, 2006
    Hmmm...Quite...savage. And brutal. And sadistic. And...


    Yeah. I'm lost for words.
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  • From ANON - omg on July 05, 2006
    wtf
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  • From ANON - Anon on February 01, 2006
    the ending wasn't the best but it was still well written.
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  • From ANON - Anon on February 01, 2006
    the ending wasn't the best but it was still well written.
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  • From ANON - Anon on February 01, 2006
    the ending wasn't the best but it was still well written.
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  • From ANON - lil john on January 30, 2006
    yo this is tight man its got me so up in there now i gotta go find some person to that to you dig dog
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  • From ANON - Jackers on January 15, 2006
    I really liked it.
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  • From ANON - Chris on January 09, 2006
    Your fic was very interesting, but you could have added more details about what the count did to klaus. Im just a sick, sadist, crazy boy. Ha ha, but your fic was very good, especially in the middle of the night. You should put up another chapter cause its really good.
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  • From ANON - Rejachan_saiyajin on November 23, 2005
    Not bad not bad, perhas a sequal or something to bring this out.
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  • From ANON - AylaWilson on November 16, 2005
    oh wow....this was so sad! i really wish there were more stories w/ count olaf in it, just cause he's the main villan! i kinda wish he picked violet cause she could probably think of a gadget that totally kicks his ass! lol. but seriously, u should definatley continue this! what will klaus be like now? what will violet do about it? and will count olaf ever set his perverted drunk eyes on the eldest bauldeire? please continue it!
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  • From ANON - Lasher on October 22, 2005
    A few things.

    He was wearing a condom? Oh yes because that makes it seem all really and stuff. 'Let me rape you and while i'm at it let me pull this condom out of no where, have put it on (without so much as mentioning it before) because I am so caring and loving. Not going to use lube, but I need that condom!

    Next, last time I checked this is the BOOK section. I don't care who looked better int he movie, if you want the moive up it in a movie section, thsi on the other hand in a BOOK section, so it should go along to the BOOK.

    Other than that I don't have much to say. Work on it a little more and you might be able to get everything right. Even get better at writing the NC sex, although one thing. One of the most humiliating things is getting pleasure from being rape etc. (which can happen in stories)
    So think about that next time you right.

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  • From ANON - rachel on September 27, 2005
    just a pointer.

    you use an apostrophe before the 's' if it's possessive.

    like 'klaus's book.'

    you DON'T use an apostrophe if it's plural.

    like 'the books'

    that would make your writing a lot better. it annoyed me.
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