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Reviews for Black Angels

By : Provocateur
  • From ANON - EriksAngel on June 03, 2005
    Another wonderfully filling chapter! I have to give you major props on the depth of the Sofia backstory that you intorduced. Giving substance to minor characters seems so hard for other writers but you handled it very well and made important parallels to Erik and Christine. I can't wait for the next chapter so please post more soon :)

    Bravo!
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  • From ANON - Sparrow\'s Pearl on June 03, 2005
    Wow! Intense and sad dream. Very dark but also very Phantom-like! :)
    I found this chapter very interesting because Sophia's description of her life with her husband was very similiar to Christine and Erik's relationship. You could just switch the names.
    I think maybe Christine and Sophia will be friends after all since they have some things in common. Maybe Sophia will be the one to make Christine realize Erik is not all that bad, hmmm?
    Enjoyed the chapter but still sitting here on pins and needles for the steamy chapter. (Don't think for one moment I forgot about it!). ;)
    Please hurry up and update, savvy?
    BRAVO on this story. It is great!

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  • From ANON - Britt on June 01, 2005
    Ohhhhh man. I think your writing gets better every chapter. I'm dying of anticipation here! Please update as fast as you can!

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  • From ANON - Anna on May 29, 2005
    Update soon please!! please! please? please?!?!?!?!?!?!
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  • From ANON - Anna on May 27, 2005
    let's go, hurry up, come on, move it....
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  • From ANON - Sparrow\'s Pearl on May 26, 2005
    (Big smile on face) Luv the chapter!!!!! Not to sound redundant, but anticipation is everything!
    I just want to know where I can go and pick up that book! Course, it has to be on the two for one special, meaning that your very own personal Erik has to come with it!!!!! :)
    Foolish Christine. She's fighting fate and love! Although I don't think she would dare admit it, she seems to be falling under his spell in more than one way. The scene when he was asleep really seemed to shake the foundation of her beliefs. Keep going Erik and don't you dare die of loneliness! Persistency will win the one battle but kindness can win the war!
    Please update soon with more steamy and Phantom-like moments. I truly love the way you write which is such a mixture of different emotions and traits. Your characters are complex and really come alive. This story is simply GREAT!
    I'm still waiting for that hot chappie but I did love this one! (Happy dance) I appreciate the mention too! :)
    BRAVO!!!!
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  • From ANON - Anon on May 26, 2005
    heh, I must admit I quite enjoyed the "lusty endeavor" :D
    This is an awesome story so far, I'll certainly keep reading now that I've found it!
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  • From ANON - Anna on May 25, 2005
    Oh, please, please continue soon. wow!
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  • From ANON - hyperhenry on May 25, 2005
    ARRRRGHHHH!!! DON'T STOP, DON'T STOP!!
    Update, update, before *I* burn up (you wouldn't want to have my untimely death by combustion on your conscience, now, would you?)
    Wow! You sure know how to procrastinate the pain. ;)

    Salut
    Hyperhenry
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  • From ANON - Britt on May 25, 2005
    Wow, from being sweet and kind to being all Marquis-style in only a day! lol, I can't say that I mind the change too much... that was hot! Yay for S&M Erik! On the other hand, Mr. Sweet-and-Kind might have more luck... and Nice Erik does make me so happy... Now see what you've done, I'm all conflicted! hahahaha that's the kind of conflict I wish I had more often. Moremoremore, please!
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  • From ANON - EriksAngel on May 25, 2005
    Another awesome chapter and might I say, a very hot one at that! I love the conflict playing out in Christine and I must say you have given her more will power than most might have :) But I will not stand for a cliffhanger, so please post soon :)
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  • From ANON - Sparrow\'s Pearl on May 21, 2005
    Oops! Forgot to say, I hope you're feeling better.
    Hate those nasty headaches!
    Sometimes visually focusing on something else helps (Erik's naked chest....Erik's naked chest....) OR (Steamy chapter is next, steamy chapter is next!....) :)
    Sorry, could not resist!
    Feel better soon and update! Saavy?
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  • From ANON - Sparrow\'s Pearl on May 21, 2005
    (Dazed look on face) Wow! That was a great chapter!
    What an emotional rollercoaster ride!
    I'm glad Phillipe and Raoul are gone for awhile longer and I think it was also a nice touch having them talk about things but also hinting at things best left unsaid.
    The discussion between Christine and Erik was great too. The point you made about him talking to her as a man and not "her Phantom" or "Angel" was a nice touch! Loved the humorous arguing between them! (By the way, I hate spiders too!!!!)
    Nice way to shift my emotions by having Erik take care of Christine while she was sick but also thinking naughty thoughts at the same time! :) That's our Phantom!!!!
    Very nicely done. I'm emotionally spent.
    I think I'll go lie down now.....
    BRAVO!
    Please remember to update soon! :)

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  • From InfernalParadise on May 20, 2005
    Oh, I just love anything about that story... especially bringing Raoul's family into this. And Christine is so hideously hilarious when drunk - I'd kick her out whenever she starts her second glass of wine at my party!! *lol*
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  • From ANON - EriksAngel on May 16, 2005
    Another great chapter! I love houw you have advanced the conflict element between Erik and Christine as well as giving Erik some erious emotional depth. A drunk Christine was so much fun too! The buildup you are creating as me on the edge of my seat so please post more soon!
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