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Reviews for A Fulfillment of Duty

By : JennyBean
  • From ANON - Lamenthatic on September 12, 2006
    Wonderful!
    The three chapters I've read have been exquiste, totaly enjoyable, and tastefully written. (not to mentoin Hot as hell) ^_~
    Awesome writing!
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  • From ANON - Death on May 29, 2005
    Are you ever going to update this? I really like this fanfic! And I havn't seen a new chapter. So could you please update soon! So I do go crazy. lol
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  • From ANON - Bonnie on April 30, 2005
    Great chapter, cant wait to see what happens. Keep up the good work
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  • From ANON - DuchessLomia on April 30, 2005
    What a delightful story. Very well written and detailed. I've always wondered what might have happended if that slave girl had not refused. Good job.
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  • From ANON - Mica on April 28, 2005
    I loved how you used "Learn to be lonely" as his only lullaby. It is very fitting, considering how his mother treated him. She loved the little lap dog more than him! Even jealous when the dog showed him more maternal love than her....You really are dead on with characterization. Totally believable. Big thumbs up on that.
    Are you planning on touching on the semi sexual interest that the Khanum showed in him? This would explain why she would feel a certain rage that another woman would accept him.
    Once again, I love this story and I wish you would continue to write more on this version of Erik. Susan Kay’s “Phantom” is so much more developed than most of stories I've read. You really get a look into Erik's head.

    Bless Gerald Butler for being such a "hottie" and getting more people interested in this Fandom!


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  • From ANON - Death on April 28, 2005
    I would love it if Erik gets his happying ending. Cause I hate Christine. >_< She's a bitch! lol! Update soon! Can't wait to see what happens to Olma! ^_~
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  • From ANON - FunkyPixieChick on April 27, 2005
    Ooh, ooh, I think I know who she's thinking of for the torture chamber victim!! That'd be an interesting blackmail on the Khanum's part: "Have sex with me, or your lover dies!" Would that be such a horrible request for any man? *giggle* Anway, lovely chapter as usual, please update soon.
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  • From ANON - LoveGuardian on April 27, 2005
    Arg! Doesn't Erik realize that she was probably talking about torturing Olma? I hope that he gets to her in time to stop such a horrible thing. Make this story end happily, please. I like this story, but I can't stand unhappy endings.
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  • From ANON - Death on April 25, 2005
    Well I like it. And no Erik didn't rape her. He was just rough. lol! ^_~ I think you did really good in this chapter. And I can't waite to read more. But maybe when she wakes up she can be little more understanding about Erik's face. Just little. Just tiny tiny bit. lol! Update soon! ^_~
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  • From ANON - daygonna on April 25, 2005
    this chapter was amazing! i really cant wait for ur next chapter ^_^
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  • From ANON - Death on April 24, 2005
    I loved! Please write more! I must see what happens! I really like this fanfic! So I beg you to continue! ^_~
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  • From ANON - daygonna on April 23, 2005
    i would love it if u were to update! I thought this would be a pretty bad story but once i started to read it i couldnt stop. u did a great job and i cant wait for an update!
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  • From ANON - FunkyPixieChick on April 22, 2005
    My favorite stories are those of Erik in Persia, and your story was very well written. I REALLY want you to write more with this.
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  • From ANON - elizabeth on April 22, 2005
    that was totally hot and really well written. i liked it and i certainly wouldn't refuse more. ;) erik deserves to get some!
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