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Reviews for Why Are You In A Skirt?

By : ozumasgirl
  • From yaoiluvr4eva on May 08, 2009
    This was extremely entertaining. I think it would be great if you went back over it when you were awake and emitted and organized it a little better. Like set it up to where there isn't a flashback. It be cool if you could delve into why that jock was all over Artemis, so we can watch Domovoi go kick some teen's ass.
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  • From ChibiBerry on December 02, 2007
    Oh, that's so funny! Butler getting jealous...being forced to shoot the kid.LOL. I liked it very much! :)
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  • From ANON - artemis fan on September 03, 2006
    If Artemis spent 90 percent of his time in front of a computer and didn't get exercise wouldn't that make him fat?
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  • From ANON - Anon on January 27, 2006
    OCC, but really, not as bad as I've seen. No, not bad at all.
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  • From asswhole on November 05, 2005
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    i really shouldn't be liking as many stories as i am lately. it must be the weed..
    but .. i liked this anyway.
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  • From ANON - White Tiger on June 19, 2005
    I like this story a lot. the only thing bad I have to say to it is that you should have described the lemon. more detail. you just kinda brushed it off. I would have reall yl ike to read that
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  • From ANON - luckyducky7too on June 08, 2005
    This story was very funny for something you did while being bored. Though I would shudder to think if Eoin Colfer actually wrote something like that. I really enjoyed it, but I thought it was kinda odd when you wrote 'Butler would bet his entire weapons collection that Artemis wasn't a virgin anymore' when later on you say that Butler and Artemis have already done it before.
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  • From ANON - jemisard on May 09, 2005
    Aside form the interludes where you leave author's notes in the middle of the story, I quite enjoyed it. It was enough in character that I could see it happening, Artemis being a little tease and Butler not knowing how to cope with the skirt or the jock. It was a bit sexy, a bit funny and enjoyable.

    I would reccomend removing your mid story notes though. It interrupts the reading, and the time stamping lets us know it's a flashback.
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  • From lonewerewolf on May 02, 2005
    why was Butler confused over Artemis's actions over him and why did he get mad over Artemis no longer being a virgin if he had already been sexually involved with his young charge?
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