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Reviews for In the swirl of passion

By : Lywhn
  • From ANON - kristina on December 22, 2005
    Hi, I just had to leave a review for this story to let you know that I have really been enjoying it. Its taking me a while to read it because I usually sneak read chapters when I'm at work, hehehe, but I look forward to reading more of it every day. I just wanted to let you know that its really great!
    Kristina
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  • From ANON - Amy on December 19, 2005
    This is absoloutly fantastic! I'm dying to see what happens next....so update ASAP ok?!
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  • From ANON - PhantasmBunny on December 17, 2005
    :D i really like your story. sehr toll! and, yes, while the English grammar/word-choice is a little rough at times, it's still very impressive that you're writing a story in a language besides German. keep up the good work, and never be discouraged. i look forward to reading more.
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  • From ANON - gabby on December 12, 2005
    send her back!!!!!!!!! dont end the story there please! send her back, have james go and get her from londen, or somthing like that, PLEASE!!!!!!!!!! im adictted to this story, update, please
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  • From ANON - Anon on December 09, 2005
    she has a gun shoot him
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  • From ANON - Silver on December 08, 2005
    hi, since english isn't my native language, I can't write much.
    But I love your story so much, I like the way you've built your characters, esp captain James Hook --> a new look about him, very cute, ... and human. >_
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  • From Lywhn on November 17, 2005
    Hi Anon,
    just to get several things right: 1.) I am 35, so you can say that I am certainly an ault; 2.) reagarding the choice of the title: just have a look on the titles of romance-novels (also written by adults, as far as I know): they often alike; 3.) I've read the book several times since I was twelve, have watched the different animated TV-showes and films, and I don't think that the persons too much out of character - after all an adult Wendy reacts in another way as the child Wendy, and for Peter it must be hard to realize that he can't win always and even he makes mistakes, and even Barrie wrote that Hook isn't total evil, so hey, why not a change for him?; 4.) sexual activities in connection with love is NO smut in my eyes, and 5.) if you don't like to read adult-stuff or espcially this story, then just don't do it. And - by the way - fantasy is a free.
    Kind regards
    Lywhn
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  • From ANON - Anon on November 16, 2005
    Oh, dear. You're much too young to be writing smut, for one thing. No adult would name their story "In the swirl of passion". I mean really. For another thing, you've never even read the book. You're a kid who's seen the movie and thought everyone was TEH HOTT!!!!!1111 This is evidenced by the fact that you know nothing of the characters.
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  • From ANON - Jettara on November 15, 2005
    I love this story, please update soon.
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  • From ANON - Roxanne on October 13, 2005
    Wow! I hope that you continue this story. I want to know who wins the bet and where it is going. I spend like 4 days reading this story between classes and after homework and between talking to friends and such. I really want to know what is going to happen next. I love this story. Please continue soon.
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  • From ANON - Byrk on October 12, 2005
    I read the first chapter of your work and must say: wonderful!!! Great that you started to write a fic in English, I'm also from germany and don't have the courage to write an English story. I fear, my spelling is too poor. Well thanks for sharing this hot tale! Greetz! Byrk
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  • From ANON - Kat on September 22, 2005
    *huggles author*
    i LOVE every minute of it!!!
    KEEEEEEEP IT UP!!!
    cya
    Kat
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  • From ANON - Kat on September 22, 2005
    I love it sooooooooooo much!!! UPDATE it!
    cya
    Kat
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  • From ANON - may on September 20, 2005
    yet again I am left in suspense
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  • From ANON - Linda on September 19, 2005
    Chapter 12, a stolen day....had me crying! You really know how to convey the tenderness between Hook and Wendy in such beautiful ways. I love this story, and your portrayal of Hook and Wendy is right on.
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