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Reviews for In the swirl of passion

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  • From ANON - Anon on September 18, 2005
    I love this story! I read it all in one day and I want to keep going. cant wait for the rest.
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  • From ANON - Linda on September 15, 2005
    Chapter 7....I love how you're building such a wonderful emotional connection between Hook and Wendy. The reader really gets the sense of their growing love for eachother. Bravo. Who cares about the spelling mistakes...the essense is good, the characters have so many dimentions, and the story is wonderful...I love the coupling of Hook and Wendy.
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  • From ANON - may on September 15, 2005
    oh my goodness!!! I believe this is the best story I've ever read. I was never big on the story of peter pan but now... whoa
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  • From ANON - Linda on September 13, 2005
    Chapter one: all I can say is wow. I've always loved Peter Pan, and a part of me was always attracked to Hook's character. This is a fantasy come true. You're a good writer....your descriptions heat up the page (and me too lol!).
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  • From ANON - shabbi on August 31, 2005
    i really like this story! keep it up!
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  • From ANON - blonde line on August 12, 2005
    can't wait for more!!!
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  • From ANON - truth beauty and all things chocolatey on August 11, 2005
    please update soon its really good
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  • From ANON - truth beauty and all things chocolatey on August 11, 2005
    please update soon its really good
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  • From ANON - Ria on August 10, 2005
    Your story is spectacular and I can't wait to read more, please, I beg of you, continue before I die of suspense.
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  • From ANON - Alan\'s Only on August 05, 2005
    i loved your story but the one thin that sucks is that if you update we (readers) don't know untill we look..but anyway i loved it great job!!
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  • From ANON - Cady on July 26, 2005
    Ahhhhh! It's about time! I was beginning to wonder where you were! I've been following this since the beginning and I LOVE IT!!! You have to let James and Wendy have a HOT, HAPPY ending. You can't stop this story now!
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  • From ANON - Eddie The Black Maru on July 24, 2005
    you....horrid....wench....HOW DARE YOU!!!!! i've been reading this bad boy since midnight and its 7 AM!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! you leave me with a clifhanger??? THE HELL?!?!?! besides it being the best hook/wendy fic ive ever read, despite the grammar errors, it was just so wonderful. wonderful. i will be back, when i am more awake to PROPERLY lecture you on this clifhanger business. drat. bed. wendy and hook...you did such a beautiful job....
    much love
    eddie
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  • From ANON - jenniferr68 on July 12, 2005
    Wonderfully written! Keep the good story coming !
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  • From ANON - Ryan on June 30, 2005
    Wonderful! I just hope that you're planning on letting Wendy and Teach interact - it would be interesting to see what he would think of her. And Hook's (and/or Pan's) reactions to their conversation.
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  • From ANON - jenniferr68 on June 30, 2005
    Wonderful chapter can not wait to read the next. Keep the great writing coming !
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